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omaewokorosushe made a smear campaign against me because i rejected her advances
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she made a smear campaign against me so now i'm snarking her RP game
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | INTERMISSION | Part 6 | Part 7 | Part 8a | Part 8b/9 | Part 10 | BONUS ROUND
Wait, Karu, I thought we were done?
We were! Here I was, innocently browsing my thumb drive that has all of my writing and shit on it, when I noticed a folder called "RPs". I'll be honest, I was expecting like, Winnermart shit and Hit List and whatever... But then what do I spy with my little eye...?
What do you mean "impromptu with rachel.txt"????
So I double-clicked it, as you do when you see something that shouldn't exist, just to make sure you're not just hallucinating from your illness.
A SKYPE CONVERSATION WITH RACHEL
that I guess has some RP elements in it.
Just a bit of a note, I did edit out things like date and time stamps 'cause like. That's not really important lmao but this took place on 12 November of 2014 not long after Once Bitten, Twice Shy began. I guess it was to plot some things out?
It's the same key as last time:
bolded italics = the text
regular = me
Rachel is...Rachel and also Duo
Karu Y. Maxwell is the writer now known as Hikaru Yuy...who is also Heero in the RP.
Rachel: So...uh...what kind of power trip is Heero going to have in Vampverse?
Heero is gonna have a power trip? That's... Not sexy.
Karu Y. Maxwell: uhhh idk
Rachel: Like what kind of stuff might he order Duo to do for shits and giggles?
Is this all fun and games to you? Why would Heero abuse whatever power like that?
Karu Y. Maxwell: I think he'd only have the power trip during sex
What power trip though???
Karu Y. Maxwell: which might make more sense
Rachel: ...I think Duo can live with this more than he'll ever let on
Rachel: I can't wait to get to the smut in this thing lol
ah see I knew all you cared about was the smut for our RPs but this is just confirmation of that so thanks
Karu Y. Maxwell: XDD
Karu Y. Maxwell: it will be quite erotic
Karu Y. Maxwell: and kinky
Will it be kinky and erotic?
Like our tags were fine, but Rachel's? Jesus fucking Christ. This was the worst RP I've ever done for a reason, you know...
Rachel: Like, will he ask Duo to do anything potentially humiliating? Or will he just order him around?
Rachel: Because yes, he CAN technically make Duo do whatever he wants.
Why would Heero want to humiliate him? Like yeah I've done humiliation/degradation kink stuff with Heero but it usually played into other kinks like golden showers.
Yes, I've had Heero piss on people. One of them gave him head after and Heero was like, "It's not every day my toilet gives me head. Must be my lucky day."
Karu Y. Maxwell: If Duo doesn't listen to him he'd probably use orders.
Karu Y. Maxwell: like
Which would make the most sense anyway, just how my Heero is as a Dom. He gives orders. His first one would be something like, "You call me 'Sir'. You answer me when I talk to you with 'yes, Sir', 'no, Sir', 'I don't know, Sir', etc. None of this 'Master' shit. Second order: You look at me. There is no shame here."
Heero: Do you want to cuddle?
Duo: ...
Heero: Would you cuddle with me?
Duo: I don't think I should...I'm just a monster.
Heero: Cuddle with me on the bed.
Duo: *cuddles with Heero on the bed*
Rachel: Yeah that's really the only objection Duo would make. "I'm a wretched creature, why would you even."
Now if Rachel wanted me to do the humiliation angle, like she had asked if I'd be okay with that, I would've said, "Oh yeah sure!" And then Heero would've said something like, "Because I want my dick wet and your mouth is perfect for it. Better than jerking off with my hand. I'll make you my cocksleeve. Get down on your knees, spread them wide for me. Open your mouth, tongue out. No teeth, no biting. If you do, there will be consequences."
Heero: You look hungry. You should eat.
Duo: But I don't deserve food, I'm a monster, don't pity me.
Heero: Eat.
Duo: *feeds from him*
Rachel: Pretty much
Rachel: Though more like "I can't feed from a sentient, I promised not to..."
Rachel: Duo's lived on animal blood since he was turned because he refused to feed on people.
Rachel: He has NEVER fed from a human/Ghoul/another vamp/etc.
But Duo knew that girl with the runes on her door was "sweet tasting" and that he'd used her before, so I call BS on this one.
Rachel: And the rest of the Maxwell Clan sees him as a traitor for it
Rachel: So like, he's caught in the middle because as a human it was all "vampires are evil" and now as a vampire it's "you are a fucking pathetic and worthless excuse for a vampire, go get staked"
Rachel: Hell, he doesn't really give two shits that Heero staked his father. His father hated him.
Except his father's first appearance was in my first tag, where he told Heero to stake him quick "so that my son doesn't see." If he hated Duo, why would he even give a shit?
Rachel: He's freaking out because he's technically in line to lead being his father's eldest "child."
Rachel: And what Heero doesn't get is that you can't just abdicate your seat in vampire culture
idk what "vampire culture" we're talking about I am p sure you can just fuck off from whatever constitutes as "vampire nobility" in VtM which is what I based everything on.
Rachel: By killing the head, Heero effectively threw Duo to the wolves. Who will try to kill him to get him out of the way so one of them can lead
Rachel: Which is why he begs Heero to kill him because a hunter will at least make it quick and (relatively) painless
Rachel: The Maxwell Clan are cold-blooded motherfuckers and prefer to play with their prey
Rachel: Giving Heero his house and service is as much for his own protection as it is out of guilt. Because even if Heero decided to abuse his power over Duo, he STILL couldn't hold a candle to whatever the Maxwells would do to him.
...I shouldn't want to go "challenge accepted" but I am so fucking tempted ngl
Karu Y. Maxwell: in a way it's a good thing Duo turned a Hunter since Heero could take them on and had the tools to at least fend them off.
Rachel: Yep
Rachel: I think when Heero wakes up after Duo explains that he's turned him, Duo will excuse himself to go sleep in the stable where the servants are supposed to.
Rachel: And Heero can then order him to sleep in bed with him
Rachel: Duo will still sort of defy it a bit by curling up with his back to Heero because he doesn't feel he can face him.
Karu Y. Maxwell: and then Heero will order him to cuddle with him.
Rachel: And Duo will obey but with tangible reluctance.
Heero: Let me nibble on you a little.
Duo: bares his neck, bracing himself to not react
Heero: *kisses Duo's neck, lapping where his pulse point would be*
Duo: shivers a little, but that's all he'll allow himself. He's not permitted to derive any pleasure from this, he's just a servant, he's property, he's furniture...
Furniture? What is this, Ai no Kusabi???
...
Shit I just remember Seki Toshihiko (voice of Duo) voices Riki in that. Fuck.
Heero: Let me see your reactions, Duo.
Duo: a flush dusts his cheeks and his hands tremble, but other than that he tries to stay still
Heero: ...writhe for me.
is this an Ore no Shita de Agake reference
Duo: whimpers, shifting his legs, his breathing starting to turn ragged
Heero: Good. *strokes Duo's face as he bites him, Duo's blood filling his mouth*
Duo: a soft pleasured cry escapes him at that bite, a shaky hand reaching for Heero's shoulder out of reflex to pull himself closer
Heero: *holds him close as he drinks, making soft moaning noises as he feels power surge through his veins*
Duo: curls up in his arms as he feels him feeding, shivering and breathing heavy with arousal. He whimpers softly against the pillow, fingers tangling in the sheets M-Master...
Heero: *seals the wound* Answer me: do you want me?
Duo: swallows thickly and nods, though looking no less ashamed for the admission
Heero: Good. Because I want you too. *spreads Duo's legs before kissing him hard*
Duo: submits easily to that, parting his thighs without resistance and letting Heero kiss him, though he makes no effort to return it, not really sure if he's supposed to. He's not really sure if he's supposed to do anything other than just lie there and let his master do what he wants.
Heero: *pulls away* I won't do anything unless you want it.
Duo: shakes his head I'm your servant, now. You take what you like, it's all yours.
Heero: ...that's not admirable, do to something against someone's will.
Duo: I don't have a will. I don't get a say in this.
Duo: I'm here to please you, so do as you wish with me.
Heero: ... *cuddles with him instead* I'm not going to do that until you want me to.
Duo: really doesn't want to, but settles his cheek against Heero's shoulder in spite of himself Why does it matter if I want anything?
Heero: Because your feelings matter to me.
Duo: shivers and nuzzles into him, not quite sure what to say
Heero: *holds him close*
MY SMUT WRITING TALENTS WERE WASTED WITH THIS
Rachel: I think Heero would figure out there's something wrong the first time when Duo is visibly restraining himself from reacting with pleasure to anything.
Rachel: When he says he's "furniture" that's exactly what he means. He's an object for Heero to lie on, a mannequin that moves. He'as not supposed to feel anything, or at least not admit that he does.
Karu Y. Maxwell: Heero wouldn't like that so much.
Rachel: Yeah. Though Duo learned this because lol, 19th century sexual mores were very very warped
Rachel: And that's when Duo was turned.
Rachel: Heero's going to have to flat-out tell him that he won't enjoy it unless he knows Duo's into it, and pleasing him in turn pleases Heero
Rachel: Because that's the disconnect. Duo thinks Heero is capable of enjoying it independent of what Duo wants, and doesn't realize it's all connected,
Heero: Duo... I won't enjoy being intimdate with you unless I know that you enjoy it too. And if I know you enjoy it, then I'll enjoy it so much more.
Duo: still not able to look up at him, but he just nods and nuzzles into Heero's chest, breath hitting his neck
Heero: *strokes his hair, pressing kisses to his forehead*
Duo: breathes shakily at the gesture, wanting more of that, but unsure of how to ask except to lean in closer for those kisses
Heero: *just stays like this for a while*
Duo: finally takes in a psyching breath, reaching a timid hand up to his cheek and just resting it there
Heero: *smiles softly, resting his hand on top of Duo's*
Duo: leans up just enough to feel Heero's breath on his lips, though still hesitant about closing that gap for a kiss
Heero: It's okay. Do it if you want to.
Duo: shivers, murmuring barely audible ...I want to. he finally seals their lips, gentle and timid but seductive in its own way
Heero: *kisses him back, just as gentle, caressing Duo's back*
Duo: moans into that kiss, carefully sucking on Heero's lower lip. His legs shift again, slowly tangling with Heero's
Heero: *toys with Duo's hair, moaning into the kiss*
Duo: whimpers as he feels himself harden at that touch to his hair, parting his lips against Heero's and sliding the hand on his cheek down to his shoulder
Heero: *murmurs* You like that, huh? *undoes the hair tie, very slowly unplaiting the braid as he deepens the kiss*
Duo: nods, moaning wantonly at Heero pulling his braid apart. He somehow draws Heero's leg between his own, pressing himself into Heero's thigh without realizing it
Heero: Oooh... As I undo your braid, I undo yourself as well... I like this a lot.
Duo: gasps, seeming to finally be aware of what he's doing and his body's reaction I-I'm sorry, Master, I--
Heero: No. Keep doing it.
Heero: This is what I want.
Heero: I want to watch you slowly come undone...
Duo: presses his cheek to Heero's chest, as if to hide his face as he carefully shifts his hips in a testing grind against Heero's thigh. He moans at the sensation, a shiver going all through him
Heero: Yesssss, Duo. Just like that... Ride my thigh.
Duo: panting against his chest, he starts to grind himself against Heero's leg in earnest, one hand clenching the cheets below him while the other grips Heero's shoulder ...Master...
Heero: Mmm... Yes, Duo... Fuck my leg. *mouths at his temple* Let yourself get lost in your feelings.
Duo: the rhythm of his hips starts to smooth out to a soft, steady rocking, whimpers hanging off the end of each breath. His hand on Heero's shoulder starts to timidly explore that body as he nuzzles up against Heero's neck
Heero: Do you want me to fuck you?
Duo: shivers and nods, Please, Master...
Heero: *gently spreads Duo's legs, kissing him sweetly as he teases Duo's entrance with the tip of his cock*
Duo: arches his hips toward Heero's cock, slipping his arms around him as they kiss
Heero: *undoes Duo's hair halfway as he thrusts his cock inside of him, moaning at how tight he is*
Duo: arches his back to take him in as deep as he'll go, leaning his head back with a blissful moaning sigh Oh god... Master...yes...
Heero: Mmm... You're beautiful, Duo... *slowly rocks his hips as he nips a little at Duo's neck*
Duo: meets that soft rhythm, a shaking hand trailing into Heero's hair. He bares his neck more, gasping at the sensation, even more at his words ...Beautiful?...
Heero: Yes. *breathes across Duo's neck as he continues his slow pace* Especially when you look like this for me... *bites him*
Duo: cries out at that bite, wrapping his legs around Heero's waist. His eyes flutter as he starts to lose himself in the feeling of belonging completely to Heero. He cluthes at his back, starting to ride his cock fluidly
Heero: *moans against Duo's neck as he thrusts faster, caressing Duo's hip and back*
Duo: can feel himself getting close to...something, he isn't sure what. His mind starts to cloud with pleasure as he clings to Heero, letting him drink his fill. The sensation is frightening in its intensity, getting even stronger, until his breath is rough and shaky and his eyes are stinging with tears
Heero: *completely undoes Duo's hair, thrusting harder as he drinks deeper, moaning louder*
Duo: moaning to the point of nearly screaming as he lets himself ride Heero's even harder thrusts, one hand pulling his hair while the other digs nails into hia back ...Oh god...Master...Master, I can't...
Heero: *stops feeding, licking the wound closed* Come for me, Duo. Let yourself go for me...
Duo: can't hold on anymore, he buries his face in Heero's neck, with a strangled sound as he climaxes in hard spasms and jerks, clenching on Heero's cock as his own spurts warm come all over both their chests and stomachs
Heero: Good boy... *a few more thrusts and he's done, coming hard and fast inside of Duo, gasping as he fills him*
Duo: moans at the feeling of Heero filling him, clinging to him and starting to shake and cry quietly, both from cold and from the overwhelming feeling
Heero: *noses his cheek as he keeps Duo close, wrapping the blankets around the both of them* Are you satisfied?
Duo: sniffs a little, nodding, just letting Heero hold him since his limbs don't want to work anymore. He still keeps his eyes averted
Duo: ...I-Is Master pleased?
Heero: Very pleased.
I'm just. My writing talent was fucking wasted on her bullshit. And that makes me so mad.
Part 1 | Part 2
she made a smear campaign against me so now i'm snarking her RP game
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | INTERMISSION | Part 6 | Part 7 | Part 8a | Part 8b/9 | Part 10 | BONUS ROUND
Wait, Karu, I thought we were done?
We were! Here I was, innocently browsing my thumb drive that has all of my writing and shit on it, when I noticed a folder called "RPs". I'll be honest, I was expecting like, Winnermart shit and Hit List and whatever... But then what do I spy with my little eye...?
What do you mean "impromptu with rachel.txt"????
So I double-clicked it, as you do when you see something that shouldn't exist, just to make sure you're not just hallucinating from your illness.
A SKYPE CONVERSATION WITH RACHEL
that I guess has some RP elements in it.
Just a bit of a note, I did edit out things like date and time stamps 'cause like. That's not really important lmao but this took place on 12 November of 2014 not long after Once Bitten, Twice Shy began. I guess it was to plot some things out?
It's the same key as last time:
bolded italics = the text
regular = me
Rachel is...Rachel and also Duo
Karu Y. Maxwell is the writer now known as Hikaru Yuy...who is also Heero in the RP.
Rachel: So...uh...what kind of power trip is Heero going to have in Vampverse?
Heero is gonna have a power trip? That's... Not sexy.
Karu Y. Maxwell: uhhh idk
Rachel: Like what kind of stuff might he order Duo to do for shits and giggles?
Is this all fun and games to you? Why would Heero abuse whatever power like that?
Karu Y. Maxwell: I think he'd only have the power trip during sex
What power trip though???
Karu Y. Maxwell: which might make more sense
Rachel: ...I think Duo can live with this more than he'll ever let on
Rachel: I can't wait to get to the smut in this thing lol
ah see I knew all you cared about was the smut for our RPs but this is just confirmation of that so thanks
Karu Y. Maxwell: XDD
Karu Y. Maxwell: it will be quite erotic
Karu Y. Maxwell: and kinky
Will it be kinky and erotic?
Like our tags were fine, but Rachel's? Jesus fucking Christ. This was the worst RP I've ever done for a reason, you know...
Rachel: Like, will he ask Duo to do anything potentially humiliating? Or will he just order him around?
Rachel: Because yes, he CAN technically make Duo do whatever he wants.
Why would Heero want to humiliate him? Like yeah I've done humiliation/degradation kink stuff with Heero but it usually played into other kinks like golden showers.
Yes, I've had Heero piss on people. One of them gave him head after and Heero was like, "It's not every day my toilet gives me head. Must be my lucky day."
Karu Y. Maxwell: If Duo doesn't listen to him he'd probably use orders.
Karu Y. Maxwell: like
Which would make the most sense anyway, just how my Heero is as a Dom. He gives orders. His first one would be something like, "You call me 'Sir'. You answer me when I talk to you with 'yes, Sir', 'no, Sir', 'I don't know, Sir', etc. None of this 'Master' shit. Second order: You look at me. There is no shame here."
Heero: Do you want to cuddle?
Duo: ...
Heero: Would you cuddle with me?
Duo: I don't think I should...I'm just a monster.
Heero: Cuddle with me on the bed.
Duo: *cuddles with Heero on the bed*
Rachel: Yeah that's really the only objection Duo would make. "I'm a wretched creature, why would you even."
Now if Rachel wanted me to do the humiliation angle, like she had asked if I'd be okay with that, I would've said, "Oh yeah sure!" And then Heero would've said something like, "Because I want my dick wet and your mouth is perfect for it. Better than jerking off with my hand. I'll make you my cocksleeve. Get down on your knees, spread them wide for me. Open your mouth, tongue out. No teeth, no biting. If you do, there will be consequences."
Heero: You look hungry. You should eat.
Duo: But I don't deserve food, I'm a monster, don't pity me.
Heero: Eat.
Duo: *feeds from him*
Rachel: Pretty much
Rachel: Though more like "I can't feed from a sentient, I promised not to..."
Rachel: Duo's lived on animal blood since he was turned because he refused to feed on people.
Rachel: He has NEVER fed from a human/Ghoul/another vamp/etc.
But Duo knew that girl with the runes on her door was "sweet tasting" and that he'd used her before, so I call BS on this one.
Rachel: And the rest of the Maxwell Clan sees him as a traitor for it
Rachel: So like, he's caught in the middle because as a human it was all "vampires are evil" and now as a vampire it's "you are a fucking pathetic and worthless excuse for a vampire, go get staked"
Rachel: Hell, he doesn't really give two shits that Heero staked his father. His father hated him.
Except his father's first appearance was in my first tag, where he told Heero to stake him quick "so that my son doesn't see." If he hated Duo, why would he even give a shit?
Rachel: He's freaking out because he's technically in line to lead being his father's eldest "child."
Rachel: And what Heero doesn't get is that you can't just abdicate your seat in vampire culture
idk what "vampire culture" we're talking about I am p sure you can just fuck off from whatever constitutes as "vampire nobility" in VtM which is what I based everything on.
Rachel: By killing the head, Heero effectively threw Duo to the wolves. Who will try to kill him to get him out of the way so one of them can lead
Rachel: Which is why he begs Heero to kill him because a hunter will at least make it quick and (relatively) painless
Rachel: The Maxwell Clan are cold-blooded motherfuckers and prefer to play with their prey
Rachel: Giving Heero his house and service is as much for his own protection as it is out of guilt. Because even if Heero decided to abuse his power over Duo, he STILL couldn't hold a candle to whatever the Maxwells would do to him.
...I shouldn't want to go "challenge accepted" but I am so fucking tempted ngl
Karu Y. Maxwell: in a way it's a good thing Duo turned a Hunter since Heero could take them on and had the tools to at least fend them off.
Rachel: Yep
Rachel: I think when Heero wakes up after Duo explains that he's turned him, Duo will excuse himself to go sleep in the stable where the servants are supposed to.
Rachel: And Heero can then order him to sleep in bed with him
Rachel: Duo will still sort of defy it a bit by curling up with his back to Heero because he doesn't feel he can face him.
Karu Y. Maxwell: and then Heero will order him to cuddle with him.
Rachel: And Duo will obey but with tangible reluctance.
Heero: Let me nibble on you a little.
Duo: bares his neck, bracing himself to not react
Heero: *kisses Duo's neck, lapping where his pulse point would be*
Duo: shivers a little, but that's all he'll allow himself. He's not permitted to derive any pleasure from this, he's just a servant, he's property, he's furniture...
Furniture? What is this, Ai no Kusabi???
...
Shit I just remember Seki Toshihiko (voice of Duo) voices Riki in that. Fuck.
Heero: Let me see your reactions, Duo.
Duo: a flush dusts his cheeks and his hands tremble, but other than that he tries to stay still
Heero: ...writhe for me.
is this an Ore no Shita de Agake reference
Duo: whimpers, shifting his legs, his breathing starting to turn ragged
Heero: Good. *strokes Duo's face as he bites him, Duo's blood filling his mouth*
Duo: a soft pleasured cry escapes him at that bite, a shaky hand reaching for Heero's shoulder out of reflex to pull himself closer
Heero: *holds him close as he drinks, making soft moaning noises as he feels power surge through his veins*
Duo: curls up in his arms as he feels him feeding, shivering and breathing heavy with arousal. He whimpers softly against the pillow, fingers tangling in the sheets M-Master...
Heero: *seals the wound* Answer me: do you want me?
Duo: swallows thickly and nods, though looking no less ashamed for the admission
Heero: Good. Because I want you too. *spreads Duo's legs before kissing him hard*
Duo: submits easily to that, parting his thighs without resistance and letting Heero kiss him, though he makes no effort to return it, not really sure if he's supposed to. He's not really sure if he's supposed to do anything other than just lie there and let his master do what he wants.
Heero: *pulls away* I won't do anything unless you want it.
Duo: shakes his head I'm your servant, now. You take what you like, it's all yours.
Heero: ...that's not admirable, do to something against someone's will.
Duo: I don't have a will. I don't get a say in this.
Duo: I'm here to please you, so do as you wish with me.
Heero: ... *cuddles with him instead* I'm not going to do that until you want me to.
Duo: really doesn't want to, but settles his cheek against Heero's shoulder in spite of himself Why does it matter if I want anything?
Heero: Because your feelings matter to me.
Duo: shivers and nuzzles into him, not quite sure what to say
Heero: *holds him close*
MY SMUT WRITING TALENTS WERE WASTED WITH THIS
Rachel: I think Heero would figure out there's something wrong the first time when Duo is visibly restraining himself from reacting with pleasure to anything.
Rachel: When he says he's "furniture" that's exactly what he means. He's an object for Heero to lie on, a mannequin that moves. He'as not supposed to feel anything, or at least not admit that he does.
Karu Y. Maxwell: Heero wouldn't like that so much.
Rachel: Yeah. Though Duo learned this because lol, 19th century sexual mores were very very warped
Rachel: And that's when Duo was turned.
Rachel: Heero's going to have to flat-out tell him that he won't enjoy it unless he knows Duo's into it, and pleasing him in turn pleases Heero
Rachel: Because that's the disconnect. Duo thinks Heero is capable of enjoying it independent of what Duo wants, and doesn't realize it's all connected,
Heero: Duo... I won't enjoy being intimdate with you unless I know that you enjoy it too. And if I know you enjoy it, then I'll enjoy it so much more.
Duo: still not able to look up at him, but he just nods and nuzzles into Heero's chest, breath hitting his neck
Heero: *strokes his hair, pressing kisses to his forehead*
Duo: breathes shakily at the gesture, wanting more of that, but unsure of how to ask except to lean in closer for those kisses
Heero: *just stays like this for a while*
Duo: finally takes in a psyching breath, reaching a timid hand up to his cheek and just resting it there
Heero: *smiles softly, resting his hand on top of Duo's*
Duo: leans up just enough to feel Heero's breath on his lips, though still hesitant about closing that gap for a kiss
Heero: It's okay. Do it if you want to.
Duo: shivers, murmuring barely audible ...I want to. he finally seals their lips, gentle and timid but seductive in its own way
Heero: *kisses him back, just as gentle, caressing Duo's back*
Duo: moans into that kiss, carefully sucking on Heero's lower lip. His legs shift again, slowly tangling with Heero's
Heero: *toys with Duo's hair, moaning into the kiss*
Duo: whimpers as he feels himself harden at that touch to his hair, parting his lips against Heero's and sliding the hand on his cheek down to his shoulder
Heero: *murmurs* You like that, huh? *undoes the hair tie, very slowly unplaiting the braid as he deepens the kiss*
Duo: nods, moaning wantonly at Heero pulling his braid apart. He somehow draws Heero's leg between his own, pressing himself into Heero's thigh without realizing it
Heero: Oooh... As I undo your braid, I undo yourself as well... I like this a lot.
Duo: gasps, seeming to finally be aware of what he's doing and his body's reaction I-I'm sorry, Master, I--
Heero: No. Keep doing it.
Heero: This is what I want.
Heero: I want to watch you slowly come undone...
Duo: presses his cheek to Heero's chest, as if to hide his face as he carefully shifts his hips in a testing grind against Heero's thigh. He moans at the sensation, a shiver going all through him
Heero: Yesssss, Duo. Just like that... Ride my thigh.
Duo: panting against his chest, he starts to grind himself against Heero's leg in earnest, one hand clenching the cheets below him while the other grips Heero's shoulder ...Master...
Heero: Mmm... Yes, Duo... Fuck my leg. *mouths at his temple* Let yourself get lost in your feelings.
Duo: the rhythm of his hips starts to smooth out to a soft, steady rocking, whimpers hanging off the end of each breath. His hand on Heero's shoulder starts to timidly explore that body as he nuzzles up against Heero's neck
Heero: Do you want me to fuck you?
Duo: shivers and nods, Please, Master...
Heero: *gently spreads Duo's legs, kissing him sweetly as he teases Duo's entrance with the tip of his cock*
Duo: arches his hips toward Heero's cock, slipping his arms around him as they kiss
Heero: *undoes Duo's hair halfway as he thrusts his cock inside of him, moaning at how tight he is*
Duo: arches his back to take him in as deep as he'll go, leaning his head back with a blissful moaning sigh Oh god... Master...yes...
Heero: Mmm... You're beautiful, Duo... *slowly rocks his hips as he nips a little at Duo's neck*
Duo: meets that soft rhythm, a shaking hand trailing into Heero's hair. He bares his neck more, gasping at the sensation, even more at his words ...Beautiful?...
Heero: Yes. *breathes across Duo's neck as he continues his slow pace* Especially when you look like this for me... *bites him*
Duo: cries out at that bite, wrapping his legs around Heero's waist. His eyes flutter as he starts to lose himself in the feeling of belonging completely to Heero. He cluthes at his back, starting to ride his cock fluidly
Heero: *moans against Duo's neck as he thrusts faster, caressing Duo's hip and back*
Duo: can feel himself getting close to...something, he isn't sure what. His mind starts to cloud with pleasure as he clings to Heero, letting him drink his fill. The sensation is frightening in its intensity, getting even stronger, until his breath is rough and shaky and his eyes are stinging with tears
Heero: *completely undoes Duo's hair, thrusting harder as he drinks deeper, moaning louder*
Duo: moaning to the point of nearly screaming as he lets himself ride Heero's even harder thrusts, one hand pulling his hair while the other digs nails into hia back ...Oh god...Master...Master, I can't...
Heero: *stops feeding, licking the wound closed* Come for me, Duo. Let yourself go for me...
Duo: can't hold on anymore, he buries his face in Heero's neck, with a strangled sound as he climaxes in hard spasms and jerks, clenching on Heero's cock as his own spurts warm come all over both their chests and stomachs
Heero: Good boy... *a few more thrusts and he's done, coming hard and fast inside of Duo, gasping as he fills him*
Duo: moans at the feeling of Heero filling him, clinging to him and starting to shake and cry quietly, both from cold and from the overwhelming feeling
Heero: *noses his cheek as he keeps Duo close, wrapping the blankets around the both of them* Are you satisfied?
Duo: sniffs a little, nodding, just letting Heero hold him since his limbs don't want to work anymore. He still keeps his eyes averted
Duo: ...I-Is Master pleased?
Heero: Very pleased.
I'm just. My writing talent was fucking wasted on her bullshit. And that makes me so mad.
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Date: 2025-10-04 12:22 pm (UTC)Oh yeah that scene with the girl, I was so busy being grossed out by Duo being such a weepy ball of wangst and the rapey undertones that I didn't think to call that out. Then again, I'm not surprised Rachel doesn't know how to be consistent, she only cared about the porn.
Talent AND effort wasted on Rachel's bullshit. And this was the one she kept nagging you about tagging, too.
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Date: 2025-10-04 09:49 pm (UTC)Right?? And the fact that she SAID it with her whole chest "I can't WAIT for the smut!" like if you just wanted a porn-without-plot you should've just...said so...instead of wanting this WHOLE STORY and then you forget things you wrote like a paragraph ago.
my time was wasted, my effort was wasted, my talent was wasted, just EVERYTHING was completely wasted and I wonder why my younger self even fucking bothered like why did we have to meet during a rly vulnerable time for me
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Date: 2025-10-04 11:04 pm (UTC)I hate that too, ugh. BR and Rachel never met but the fact that BR was ruining everything and Rachel swooped in when she'd ruined your friendships with me and Lexi? Fucking ugh.