she made a smear campaign against me so now i'm snarking her RP game [9/10]

[omaewokorosu]

she made a smear campaign against me because i rejected her advances
Part 1 | Part 2
she made a smear campaign against me so now i'm snarking her RP game
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | INTERMISSION | Part 6 | Part 7 | Part 8a | Part 8b/9 | Part 10

WHAT RP ARE WE DOING THIS TIME?
It is still Give Me the Fruit/Mythological Desecration in the Name of 1x2, which, if you forgot, is 33k words of a (poorly) reimagined Kidnapping of Persephone, you know, the tale of how Hades took Persephone into the underworld and Demeter was mad about it and Zeus was like SHRUG and Hades won 50-50 custody and Demeter was still Big Mad but not as Big Mad as she was?

Yeah.

THIS IS PART TWO because this RP is so long it needed to be SPLIT IN HALF.

THE CAST OF GIVE ME THE FRUIT:
RACHEL THE DEMON as..........DUO MAXWELL...aka the God of the Underworld, Hades
HIKARU YUY as............................HEERO YUY...aka Goddess of Spring (for half the year) and Goddess of the Underworld (the rest of the year), Persephone

I forget who plays any NPCs but that doesn't really matter.

The format is the same as it was in Parts 6 and 7 because it's the easiest way to do this now lol

BOLD AND ITALICS = the RP text

ITALICS = RP tag rewrites, if there are any

REGULAR = everything else (commentary, etc.)

I will be doing what I did in part one of this RP, and only saying something if it warrants it, because this is a lot to go through, and it's like. Do I want to nitpick everything? (Yes.) I snark more in the snark plurks, so those are, you know, there.

LET'S GET CRACKING.

Contains lots of smut.


Heero moaned, unable to take his eyes off of Duo for even the briefest of moments, legs trembling from the delicious sensations Duo created with his tongue.
"Yessss," Heero hissed. "Yes, just like that. You like me in your throat? Like my cock in that tight throat of yours?" He was breathing heavily now, so close to the edge already. He wasn't going to come yet--he couldn't come yet, had to hold out. He tried not to buck into his mouth either, didn't want to hurt him, didn't want to choke him either, but gods did he want to fuck that mouth, hear Duo moan around the cock in his mouth, the look in his eyes as he--

Heero cried out as he bucked hard. Trying to stay still was so hard.
"Show me what you can do with your mouth."

Now if I wrote this for literally anything else I would've gone, "Oh my god that's really fucking hot good fucking lord!" but because it's for this it's less sexy but also.

Good fucking god, Heero. This is how you do dirty talk! Take notes, Rachel.

Heero cried out with each thrust as he fucked Duo's mouth, his eyes darkened with lust as he gave himself over completely to instinct, let his fantasy play out… He got too carried away and all too soon Heero keened Duo's name and came hard inside Duo's mouth, pulling out at the last minute and thus getting half of it on Duo's face. Panting heavily, he looked at his husband and managed to get out, "S-Sorry… I didn't mean to… I wanted to hold out a little longer…"

How embarrassing. He could feel his cheeks flare as he looked away, shame written all over his features as he tried to calm his breathing. "Next time I'll try to hold out longer…"

Heero's face was flushed as Duo kissed him, tasting himself mixed with the taste of Duo, something he couldn't place and had never before tasted. Duo's hands trembled on his shoulders and Heero wrapped his arms around Duo's neck before trailing kisses down Duo's jaw. He nosed Duo's cheek as he climbed onto his lap, moaning at the skin to skin contact.

"Fuck me," Heero whispered into Duo's ear. "Let me satiate your desire." He rubbed up against him to make a point, feeling how much Duo needed him. "The only word I want on my lips is your name." He took the initiative and slid Duo inside him in one graceful movement that caused him to gasp as Duo was now fully inside him. His eyes darkened further, voice sultry as he said, "I want you to make me scream your name so loud even the realm of the living can hear."

I want my mother to know who has me.

Something about the line "I want my mother to know who has me" after "I want you to make me scream your name so loud even the living can hear" just...it's so hot. Goddamn, younger me goddamn.

Heero's nails raked across Duo's back as he spread his legs wider, wanting Duo deeper inside, though he was in as deep as he could go. His hips met Duo's, his moans echoing off the walls as he let his lust control him, let his desire take him to places he had never gone before, never thought he could go.
"D-Duo…" The name could barely come out coherent. He groaned, kissing Duo roughly, as he set the pace, growling low in his throat as he rode Duo fast and hard.

"You're gonna make me come again…." He nipped Duo's jaw. "I want to come again for you, I want you to come inside me, I'm gonna…"
"Do you know how good you feel?" He bucked his hips hard. "So good… So good inside me…" Heero kissed Duo, sliding his tongue inside, sweeping it through his mouth before mimicking the same motions he wanted Duo to do with his cock. He took Duo's hands, laced their fingers together briefly before placing them on his hips.

"I want to lose control."

Heero focused on how he felt, how Duo made him feel with those deep and fast strokes, with the biting, the marking. He liked it rough, he realised. Rough and hard. He wanted to be bleeding if it meant everyone knew exactly who he was now married to. He gasped, everything building up in the pit of his stomach.
"D-Duo…" He met those thrusts, bucked wildly now. He cried out loudly, so close to what he felt like before, so close to giving Duo what he wanted… He was pretty sure there would be bruising after this, but he didn't care. He shifted his hips a little and moaned at how good that felt. He made sure to keep touching that spot inside as he rode him hard, losing his sense of rhythm when every muscle in his body tensed. He screamed Duo's name, nails digging deep into Duo's back, tears in his eyes as he came--hard. He came all over Duo's chest and stomach, no shame whatsoever.

There was nothing to feel ashamed about anymore.
He slumped against Duo, exhausted, sweaty, and sticky, panting in an effort to catch his breath as tears rolled down his cheeks.

Heero rested against Duo as he tried to get his breathing under control. He nodded. "I'm...I'm okay, just...completely overwhelmed by everything." He sniffled, wiping at his eyes. "Sorry… I tend to do this and it's kind of embarrassing." He kissed Duo, soft and sweet, before nosing into his neck. "Rest assured it's nothing you did wrong, you certainly did everything right and then some…"

Back in the world above, Demeter was scouring the forest for any sign of her son. Those blasted nymphs would pay for losing track of the most precious thing in her life, but such punishment would wait until she could find Heero again. She was in the deepest part now, where gnarled trees nearly blocked out the light. She noticed something on the ground. A dead deer. This was not all that unusual, for many people hunted in these parts. She bent down to examine it when she noticed something else.

A bow and quiver. The same one Heero hunted with. Staring at the tree she noticed something strange about it. Narrowing her eyes, she stood, her son's bow in her hands. That was a portal to Hades, a place where the living dared not enter unless they didn't want to leave it. Her son couldn't possibly be stupid enough…

Duo. Had he taken her son? Why would he do such a thing? What did he have to gain except to piss her off? She would have to speak to Zechs, the God of Thunder and known womaniser, about this. She would do anything to bring Heero back, even if it meant she had to go down into Hades herself and retrieve him.

Too bad Heero not only couldn't leave, but he had no intentions of doing so anyway.

Heero gasped at the sudden emptiness he felt when Duo pulled out of him, his insides grasping for the cock that used to be inside him. He would definitely need to bathe, or at least have a quickie shower, but that could come later. Duo wiping them down would be enough for now. He smiled a little at Duo's encouragement, and then felt his cheeks burn.
"I...I guess so," he said with a slight shrug. "I've never had this before, so I really can't say, but I definitely enjoyed that and want that again." He kissed Duo. "But only with you, I don't want anyone else except you."

This was the perfect time for Megara to come in. There was a scowl on her face.
"Apparently someone's making waves up above," she said. "Her child has been taken from her. Kid was probably a brat, but even brats deserve love. She's going to petition Zechs." She snorted as her sister Alecto muttered, "Probably do more than 'petition' him."
"I can hear her wailing down here," Megara said. "The Gods know if her child was taken by Thanatos, Zechs will be having a chat with you for souls and shit." She crossed her arms. She hated it when people came down here to beg and plead. The only amusing one was that dumbass with a harp, oh...what was his name? Oedipus? No. Orion? No, definitely not, Orion had more class. Oh well, his name wasn't important.

"When will the crowning ceremony commence?" Alecto asked. "It's been quite a while since we've had a queen of the underworld...and another god no less." She chuckled. "I think there's a crown around somewhere, if not one can easily be made. Certainly he will look beautiful sitting on a throne next to you."

Two worlds above, Demeter, who wasn't 'wailing' so much as screaming about how the fucker who took her son would pay and pay dearly, was staring Zechs dead in the eye. He looked like he would rather be anywhere but where he was at the current moment and even rolled his eyes at one point.
"Une," Zechs said in his velvety baritone that made immortal and mortal women alike swoon, much to Lu's annoyance. "Could you stop cussing and reading me the Riot Act for one second and tell me why the hell you're here?"
Une glared. "Someone took Heero, who as you'll remember is our son so I expect you to at least pretend that you give a shit."
Zechs sat up a little straighter on his throne. "Do you know who?"
"If I knew, why the hell would I waste my time here? But I certainly have my suspicions."

Zechs crossed his legs and tried to seem relaxed, though he was perturbed. Despite Zechs' reputation and the fact that he had many bastard children, Zechs loved each and every one of them and didn't want anything malevolent to befall them.
"There was a dead deer by a well known portal. No visible wounds. He would make a lovely trophy for the average hunter...and also an equally lovely offering for a god. Who else would be able to kill such a lovely animal with no signs of anything?"
"Duo."
Une nodded. Zechs' eyes narrowed slightly.
"Une, if Duo has taken Heero to Hades…"

Une looked at him with accusation in her eyes. "You knew about this."
Zechs blinked. "What?"
"Don't lie to me, Zechs. You arranged this."
Zechs sighed. "Une, I only arranged it that one time."
"Yes, and now our daughter is in the Underworld, but not as its queen, as a spirit because she is dead."
"Believe me, I have no hand in this, I swear by the Styx. I am merely saying that if Duo took Heero, you need to act fast. If he breaks fast and eats something down below… He is lost to you."
Une snorted in a rather un-goddess like fashion. "Heero is not stupid enough to be tricked into that. He is not his sister."

Back down in Hades, Heero was consuming a great feast consisting of all different kinds of fruit and nuts as well as various meats. Heero didn't want to know where one would acquire meat from in this realm, but it was definitely tasty. A feast fit for a king and his lover to celebrate the start of their new life together. It was a bit ironic, to say the least. At this point, Heero was Duo's several times over.

"But if he has, let's say," Zechs said. "Depending on how much he's eaten, he--"
"--will have to stay with Duo for however long, yes, I know."
Zechs gave her a look. "If he's eaten enough, you won't be able to retrieve him. And our brother…. You know how he works."
"Boy do I ever."
"I will give you my blessing to go down there, Lady Demeter," Zechs said, using her title. "However, you still need to ask Duo once you traverse there. I still don't know what your issue is with him, when he would make a fine husband for any one of our children."
"Aside from the fact that that place is as dark and dank and murky as ever, and that Heero is a child of the light and not the darkness, I have had the misfortune of being fucked over by both you and our brother Treize, and I've had a daughter fucked over by Duo already, I do not need this shit."

She spun on her heel and walked out of Zechs' grandiose palace. She would need to locate that portal again and pay her dearest brother Duo a visit. If her suspicions were correct, he had Heero, and she would not hesitate in the least to bring Heero back with her.

Whether Heero wanted it or not.

***

It was much later in the evening, after the feast, when Duo led them down to the bath.  Again, Duo had his own, because he didn’t like being naked around people he didn’t trust.  And in this land, there were very few beings that he did.

It was a large and clear pool, rimmed by a stone circle decked with ever-burning torches, the firelight playing off the precious gems set into the stone.  Duo stripped out of his dressing robe, heaping it on a rock before stepping into the water and offering Heero his hand.  “Care to join me, love?”

Okay so... My (977 word) RP tag had all of this shit going on. The Erinyes making comments, Zeus and Demeter bickering, Heero having a literal feast after getting fucked, mentions of a crowning ceremony... Very action packed!

And then we have a 100 word response that's basically Duo bringing Heero to a bath and going, "Wanna bathe together?"

In the snark plurks I do as "companions" of sorts to this (where I more or less get out all the kneejerk and bring the good bits into this entry), Lexi keeps bringing up how her RP partner writes short (comparatively speaking to her) tags, and that's fine! The length isn't the issue here. It's the quality. I give 977 words of story, she gives me 100 words of filler until the next sex scene is initiated, and the filler is more or less pushing us into that next sex scene.

Duo doesn't react to hearing there's some shit going on above (as mentioned by the Erinyes), there is no actual discussion considering Duo will be affected by it since someone will have to come down attempting negotiations, there is nothing about the tag I wrote. It's just Rachel going, "Okay, bath time!" ignoring all of the story. Which, as a writer, I find insulting. This isn't a porn-without-plot, it is a porn-with-plot, there is a difference in all but acronym. If it were without plot, they would just be fucking with no preamble, because you don't need one, it doesn't matter.

And to think that Rachel's sockpuppet account said that I "owe it to [my] craft" to not be shitty. Who is the shitty writer here, Rachel??? I'm not an innocent character you can project all of your shit onto!

Heero didn't need to be asked twice. He slipped off his own robe before laying it on top of Duo's and taking his hand. The water felt nice, especially after all the 'festivities' that happened for the better part of the day. He sat down in the water and let out a contented sigh, letting himself relax. He rested his head on Duo's shoulder and idly toyed with his hair as he nuzzled Duo's neck. He wasn't worried about his mother coming and destroying everything, although that was a distinct possibility, but it wouldn't happen now, at least, not right away. First she would go to Zechs, who probably wouldn't give a crap because Une would be interrupting his 'happy time'. Her and Noin often had tea together and she would just roll her eyes. Heero had only gone with his mother once, and it was so boring he felt like jumping from the top of Olympus.

He kissed Duo's jaw before nuzzling that same spot. "I love you," he murmured. Sure he'd only known Duo for what, a day? and he was already proclaiming his love, but then again they were also kind of married as well. This might not have been the best way to do things, but Heero didn't care. He had someone who gave a shit about him who wasn't his mother, and Duo didn't keep him on a suffocating leash. Mostly because the reason his mother kept him on such a short leash was so no one would go and ruin his 'purity'. Well, that was gone now, every last shred of it. A hundred times over, at least.

He smirked. If only his mother knew… Or maybe she did. He didn't care either way.

Duo slid his arm around his husband’s shoulders, drawing him in close and nuzzling his forehead before pressing a tiny kiss there.  “I love you, too.  If only I could’ve found and freed you sooner…”  He stroked Heero’s hair, wetting it a bit with the water.

You know...this whole relationship dynamic isn't really healthy when you think about it.

Heero went with Duo simply to escape his mother. That was it. There wasn't really any love behind the decision, it was Heero literally running away from home and marrying the first guy who blew in his ear.

It was true he’d only ‘known’ Heero for a day.  But in truth he’d known him longer than that.  He could just never get close enough because of his mother.  He’d been waiting for the day that she would turn her back just long enough for him to wander off, and finally that day was here.  Heero didn’t belong to her any longer.

So Duo was plotting a kidnapping the entire time.

That's not creepy or anything.

Duo leaned down to kiss him, but not as frantic or hard as before.  Soft, sweet, surprisingly...chaste, considering all they’d been up to earlier.  Stroking his hair and pressing his face between both hands.  Cradling him like he was made of something far more precious than any of the gems found here.

Because to Duo, he was.

Why are we cradling Heero?

"He's far more precious than the gems here." okay well depending on the gems that might be true, sure, because you have like, mineral gems (quartz, etc) and semi-precious (topaz, etc) and then precious (diamond, sapphire, emerald, etc) so like. what are we talking here

"Don't be sorry," Heero said. "There was no way you knew I even existed until today. My mother...she didn't let many get close. They knew, of course, that she had children, but she always said we were too shy, or too busy with our duties. She didn't want me to get married, she wanted me to be one of those virgin gods people devote all their time worshipping because they end up having nothing else. To raise beautiful flowers from the earth, retrieve saplings from acorns… She wanted me to help her, ignoring what I wanted. I didn't even know what I wanted, except I didn't want that. I couldn't even go out alone." He kissed Duo back, returning it just as soft and sweet as he was given.

"And then when I got the chance to slip away from them, I did. I thought maybe I'd miss something, but I don't. How can I miss being trapped, being a prisoner, when you've shown me what freedom is? Other deities call this a prison and you the warden, but they've never had to live the life I was forced into. I'd rather be ruler of the underworld than trail behind her."

Missed opportunity for Heero to say, "I would rather rule in hell than serve in heaven."

He kissed the palm of Duo's hand. "I had sisters. They all ended up married or priestesses or some shit to Zechs." Probably more than 'priestesses', Heero added in his head. "I was all that she had left to cling to. And now I am hers to cling to no longer, she will have to find her own way."

Duo slid his arms around him more securely, stroking his back as he let him talk.  “I...I did see you before.  But I could never get close enough because she or the damned nymphs were always there.  I finally decided I had to lead you away from them somehow.  Time is a double-edged sword when you’re immortal.  You have all you could ever need, and that’s the problem.”

He started to rub Heero’s shoulders a bit, gently massaging him.  “I couldn’t wait any longer.  I couldn’t see you trapped and hidden away like that.  I had to have you for myself.”

So that Heero can be...trapped...and hidden...forever.

Okay. Make that make sense. Because when you think about it, whether Heero was trapped living with Demeter forever or being trapped in the Underworld with Duo forever, it's pretty much the same thing. And at the start of this whole thing, Heero did question if what he was doing was even worth it, or if he was just trading one gilded cage for another.

FROM THE START OF THIS RP: [Heero] hoped, however, that he hadn't just traded one gilded cage for another.

And he did. He is even more trapped. Even though he needed chaperones or whatever, he could still go wherever he pleased. He could go hunting, he could go to the shops, he could wander amongst nature. Maybe once Heero was of a certain age he could've gotten Zeus involved and get the reins loosened considerably. Something! Whereas this, Heero can't leave. He is permanently bound to the Underworld.

No one visits the Underworld, no one goes there unless they're dead or fulfilling a quest of some kind given to them by a god or oracle or both. It's not like people are dropping by just to drop by. Heero will have only Duo, Charon, the Erinyes, a three-headed dog, and the dead for company. Hell, even the dead have more freedom.

Heero, you fucked yourself.

"You could have stolen me away in the night or something," Heero said with a hint of amusement. "Or if anything you could have petitioned Zechs, though I doubt he'd be much help given he knows what a pain in the ass my mother is." He groaned in approval at the massage. "Then again the first thing probably wouldn't happen since deities aren't supposed to go into the land of mortals. That's why Zechs gets in trouble so often, for showing himself to the women." He could feel himself relaxing further.

"I guess it doesn't really matter how it happened, just that it did...and I couldn't be happier.

Just wait. Wait until all those "feel good" feelings wear off and the "honeymoon period" is over. Heero putting himself in a position where he literally can't leave is antithetical to Heero as a character. Heero goes wherever he pleases whenever he pleases. And I know what y'all are thinking: If Heero gets married and/or has kids, that would require him to stick around.

Which yes, it would, unless we're making Heero a deadbeat, which is also antithetical to his character.

But the reason why Heero comes and goes so often, why he's so much of a vagabond of sorts, is because he hasn't found that "home" yet. It's easy to pack up and leave if you feel like there's really no place for you there. But if Heero has a reason to stay somewhere, to plant roots? He will. He's looking for stability. Once he finds it, he's not going to leave it.

Now I don't know that Heero wouldn't have realised his error, because this RP just abruptly ends without any conclusion. He could end up realising, "Oh shit, I fucked up," and then in typical Greek Mythological Fashion, undergoing some sort of Epic Quest to fetch a bunch of shit and then give it all to someone and BOOM Heero is now unchained from the Underworld.

Like not even Persephone is completely tied to the Underworld. She heads down in autumn, is there for all of winter, and then comes back for spring. And Hades is her husband. 

I can actually be me instead of whatever the hell my mother has decided I should be. But just so you know, she will most likely show up… She can't do a damn thing to me at this point, but she will try, and try very hard. Honestly, what better husband for me than someone she knows instead of some stranger jackass?"

And another thing I want to note: it honestly does sound like Heero married Duo simply to get away from what he considers an intolerable situation. And marrying someone explicitly so you can get out of some awful living situation is a marriage that won't last.

He could vaguely hear the sound of thunder.
"I just want to make sure Zechs doesn't try to bend rules this time."

Duo chuckled.  “I will be well-prepared when she does.  Considering how much she’s worried about your non-existent purity, I know precisely how to get her out of our hair when she does decide to show her face.”  He gently turned Heero so his back was to him, starting to knead into the tired muscles along his spine.  “She won’t know what hit her.”

He kissed the top of Heero’s head, shivering a little at the plans he had for him.  He was going to be thoroughly stained and debauched in every way imaginable before Demeter showed up.  Such that she wouldn’t be able to stand the sight or smell of him.

Heero has already been corrupted, you don't have to up the ante and make this creepy instead of, you know, sexy.

“I’m not letting anyone take you from me.”

"Outside of blasphemy you are probably going to defile me in as many ways as you can so she'll be disgusted and wouldn't want me back anyway," Heero said, as Duo turned him so he could reach his back. He leaned into Duo's hands, letting him work his sore, tired muscles. "We could always invite her for the crowning ceremony when it happens… It's kind of a nice little 'fuck you', I think, seeing me being crowned as yours… I'm sure there are other 'fuck yous' we could do, such as keeping her out of our lives and making it so she doesn't know and never will know where I ended up, leading her to wonder… Maybe a hunter took me down, or maybe I ran off with some thief. Maybe I became a whore."

Heero, going "no contact" is way easier than weird revenge fantasies. Like I get it, but still. 

He laughed at the last one. "God of the Springtime spreading his legs for every man and woman in Greece. ...Perhaps maybe some animals too, who the hell knows? There was that weirdo who gave birth to that half-bull half human kid."

...bestiality? Not something I would ever have Heero engage in so that's a weird thing to mention.

Heero would rather fuck a bull than go back to his mother, so he supposed that was always an option.
"Only one I'm spreading my legs for is you," Heero purred. "You're the first and only person who will ever have the honour of being inside me." He tilted his head back and kissed Duo with just the tiniest hint of tongue. Though he wouldn't mind fucking Duo in the bath--or being fucked in it--they certainly did enough of that for one day that Heero just wanted something sweet and romantic. Surrounded by ever-lit torches gave a bit of a romantic atmosphere--as much as one could get in the land of the dead. There were even flowers, though nothing like the ones above. They mostly consisted of asphodel and poisonous things like belladonna and aconite, beautiful to look at but something that shouldn't be touched.

Perhaps Heero was more like belladonna--meant to be looked at but stayed far away from. Only Death himself could touch him without succumbing to the terrible side-effects. He wondered briefly what sort of flowers he could grow now that he belonged to this place. He would have to try that out later.

Duo smirked.  “That’s part of it, yes.”  He answered that kiss with an equal tease of tongue.  “I plan to dirty you, sully you, debauch you...fuck you every way you want and even some you weren’t aware you wanted, until she can’t even stand to look at you.”

He pulled Heero back against him, wrapping his arms over him from behind.  But not demanding anything.  Heero was not his toy, despite what it looked like on the surface.

idk it sounds like you want to use Heero as a cocksleeve, which is fine as long as he's consenting to being used as a cocksleeve? 

He just lay back against the edge of the bath with him, kissing him slow and teasingly.  If they ended up fucking in the bath?  Great.  If not, this was more than fine, too.

"Maybe Aphrodite can tell her to lighten up a bit and get laid herself," Heero said. "Who knows, maybe in some twisted way that's what she was grooming me for." He shivered at the thought as bile rose in his throat. Incest amongst the gods wasn't uncommon--Zeus married Hera, who was his sister, not to mention that he was the product of incest himself and Duo was technically his uncle. Heero didn't care about that though. He rested his hands on top of Duo's and just sat like that as he kissed him back, moaning lightly as he teased with his tongue. He had no intentions of fucking in the bath but he wouldn't object if Duo told him to spread his legs. Being like this, just enjoying the touch of the other's body… This was perfect.
He lay his head back and yawned. He was exhausted, but it was a good kind of exhausted, the kind you got when you were productive. Heero was certainly productive, even before he ended up here--he'd weeded the entirety of his mother's garden, watered everything… And then of course he went hunting. Heero would have to find some way of occupying his time. Maybe there was an archery area somewhere so he didn't get rusty. If anything souls that wanted to escape would think twice when faced with a bow and someone with enough accuracy to do some damage. If he listened hard enough he could hear someone cursing in a different language, one foreign to his ears.

"I'm assuming that perpetually moaning and groaning and whining from the souls that are stranded is something I'll get used to with time?" He heard something about someone dropping a harp on his head before burial rites were arranged. It must've been that dumbass with a harp Duo had mentioned earlier. He'd be pissed too if someone did that.

Duo leaned down to kiss his throat and shoulder, stroking his chest and collar.  “It wouldn’t surprise me if that was her aim.  Those who restrain their desires often do so for a reason.”

He couldn’t resist just slipping one hand below the water to stroke his hip, drag his nails over the boy’s

watch the deuce
man I'm stingy with my kitty cat, daddy 

skin gently.  He really was beautiful.  No wonder she kept him under lock and key for so long.  But they were both tired and he wasn’t going to push the subject.  Not this late in the day.  Give him some time to rest first before he showed him what else he could do.

“If you want to keep your skills fresh, I’m sure the Furies wouldn’t mind showing you the archery range.  Alecto uses a bow as well, and if you’re going to be a vengeance goddess, you can’t afford to get sloppy.”

He brushed his fingers over Heero’s lips, kissing his ear.  “We don’t have to do any more tonight unless you wish it.  Though...don’t hesitate to tell me if the mood strikes…”

"I think I'd rather marry the Cyclops than marry my own mother," Heero said, disdain in his voice. "Hell I think I'd rather marry Charon. At least he has a sense of humor."

Heero moaned, leaning in to the touch, his body reacting to even the smallest sensation from his husband. Heero was tired, yes, but it was obvious some parts of his body didn't get the memo. There was plenty of time for all the things Duo could do with his hands and gods knew what else, and Heero could enjoy them when he wasn't half falling asleep. Perhaps in the morning before breakfast… Maybe once they got to bed, Heero wouldn't be tired anymore.

"Really I want to keep my skills sharp in case my mother gets too far out of line, then at least she can join the rest of the assholes down here until she finds her way to Elysian." He sank a little lower under the water. "But I'm sure if you're trying to fuck someone over, you need to make sure you can still do it…"

He kissed Duo's fingers. "I'm really sleepy… I guess the water isn't helping. I don't mind being like this for a while." Although he was half-hard from Duo's touch and he wouldn't mind Duo taking him in the bath… His brain said sleep was the practical thing to do but his cock twitched at the thought of Duo touching him. Where Duo's hand was on Heero's hip, his skin felt heated, and he wanted that hand lower.

His cock could wait until morning though. Right now sleep won out. Without realising it, he slowly drifted off, comforted by the fact that Duo was holding him and that, for once, he was with someone who loved him and wanted him for something other than appearing down to earth to all the humans.

Duo smiled as he felt him drift off in his arms, just staying there for a little bit and holding him close.  Watching him sleep, the way his chest rose and fell with his breath.  Until finally he thought maybe they should sleep in a proper bed, since that would be far more comfortable.

Careful not to wake him, he carried Heero out of the bath to the deck of the pool, drying them both off and wrapping him in the towel before he brought him to that same private chamber as before.  He set him down in the bed before climbing in beside him, spooning behind him and nuzzling his cheek with his nose.

“Good night, love.  You’re safe here.  It’ll take her plenty of time to find you, and by then, you’ll be mine alone.”

He kissed Heero’s temple, before snuggling down to sleep himself.

Heero slept. Sort of. He kept having dreams in which his mother ripped him out of Hades somehow and he ended up never seeing daylight again until he was 'properly married' to some bimbo farmgirl who Heero was surprised she even knew her own damn name. He awoke, or so he thought, and found himself back at home, with daylight streaming through. So it was all just a dream. He got up and looked at the mirror...only to find a dark red mark on his neck.

Which is when Heero awoke for real. Sort of. There was no daylight, and the bed was too comfortable to be the one in that shack his mother called a house. There was something warm behind him...and something warm between his legs. His body tingled at the stroking sensation, and Heero couldn't help but let out a small moan that sounded like "Duo".

Duo smirked next to his ear as he let his fingers glide up and down the slowly hardening shaft, playing with the head before teasing their way back down.  He sucked on Heero’s earlobe at that moan, starting to carefully wrap his fingers around that cock.

“Good morning, husband…”  He nudged him for a kiss, slipping him tongue as he drew him further back into that embrace.

"Good morning, husband"? Who the fuck talks like this? It would be like me greeting my wife in the morning, "Good morning, wife!"

Heero gasped when Duo wrapped his fingers around his cock, fingers grasping at the pillow and the sheets underneath him as he pushed himself further into Duo's arms, baring his neck for him.
"G-Good morning--aah!" Heero must have been overly sensitive or something as Duo's touch sent shivers up and down his spine. He kissed Duo back eagerly, sucking on that tongue as he ground his hips into his hand. His cock throbbed as he moaned into Duo's mouth, wanting more than Duo's touch.

He wanted to feel owned.

Duo bit gently at his throat.  Enough to be slightly painful, but more a sense of pressure and sucking than using his teeth.  He licked his lips, chuckling.  “Mmmm, someone likes that, do they?”

His other hand slid down to that tight, twitching little entrance, starting to stroke in a gentle circle to loosen the muscle there.  “You want it this morning?  You want me inside you?”  He was sure of the answer, but he wanted to hear Heero beg for it.  Wanted to hear the way his voice broke when he was so heavily turned on.

Heero's voice in my headcanon does crack during sex, like if he's coming and yelling and just having sound come out of his throat without a fuck to give? Yeah his voice cracks.

“It’s okay, talk to me.  Tell me what you want me to do to you…”

Heero nodded as Duo touched him in other places, eliciting another moan from him. He wanted Duo's fingers inside him, stretching him, filling him, though they wouldn't fill him as much as his cock would. At that thought Heero moaned with need and desire plain in his voice.
"I...I want you… I want you inside me…" He rubbed himself against Duo's fingers. "Please… Please fuck me… Fill me with your cock and fuck me…" His senses were overloaded with pleasure between Duo's stroking and his words.

"Need you….so bad…" He looked up at Duo with darkened eyes and flushed cheeks as he lifted his leg and rested it on Duo's hip. "Please…."

Duo purred in his ear at that begging and whimpering, at those delicious moans.  Gently, carefully, he slipped a finger inside him.  Then a second.  Stretching him slowly as he kept stroking his cock, but not hard enough to sate him or get him off just yet.  “That’s my good boy,” he whispered.  “Let me in, baby…”

He let Heero feel how much he wanted it as he was as he pressed against the back of his thigh.  “That’s waiting for you, love.”  He slid a third finger inside him, twisting them gently.  “Just relax…”  He pressed the head of his cock against him, teasing and stroking it against his entrance, letting him feel how hard he was.

“This is what you do to me, love.  This is how bad I want you…”

Heero gasped when Duo slid a finger inside him. It definitely didn't fill him as much as his cock would, but it was better than nothing. A second one joined the first and Heero had to try and contain himself, had to try to not ride those fingers. He tried to relax, but when Duo inserted a third finger, Heero couldn't help but try and push them deeper. Then of course he felt Duo's cock and when he moaned he was practically begging, his body crazy with want.

"Please…" He rested a hand on top of Duo's, letting him continue to stroke his own hard length. "Please take me…" He was so horny he was practically in tears, his body trembling. He spread himself more before kissing Duo hard, tongue sweeping through his mouth. "I don't care if you fuck me like an animal or you fuck me nice and slow I just need your cock inside me."

Duo placed his hand on Heero’s hip at that demand, feeling the desperate tension in his body.  “I can do both, baby.  You don’t have to choose…”

He carefully slid inside him in one deep, slow movement, turning his head for kiss to swallow that first sound.  Rubbing his hip in encouragement to ride him as he started to thrust slowly, sweetly.  Lazy and gentle but at the same time deep and full.  Hands roaming over his body as he kept kissing him, drawing him further in, encouraging him to open himself and lose himself in the sensation.  To let himself be owned and completely taken.

Heero moaned loudly at how deep Duo was inside of him and how he managed to do that in one fluid motion. Good thing they were laying down because if Heero had been standing, he would have ended up on his knees. His moan was swallowed by Duo's kiss and he didn't need much encouragement to ride him. He rocked his hips, feeling Duo stroking his insides while his hand continued to work his cock. He spread himself as much as he could and bothered with no resistance, surrendering to the most basic and carnal of desires that no mortal or immortal could ignore. He moaned in time with each thrust as he grasped at his pillow.

He couldn't think of a better way to wake up in the morning.

Jesus Christ why is my portion of this smut so fucking good???

Duo parted that kiss for air, just looking at Heero through a half-lidded gaze before nuzzling him into the bed from behind as he kept thrusting so deep into him.  “Yes…”  He panted next to his ear.  “You feel so good…  You’re so tight and deep…  And you’re mine.  You’re all mine...”

His thrusts were getting rougher, harder, though his pace remained slow.  He was starting to succumb to the feeling himself, the want and need he had for this boy

Did you ever really love me, Steebie?
Rrr, pull up in the brrr
wrist on brrrr, pussy on prrr-rrr 

in his arms.  “Heero…”

Heero was half on his stomach as he met Duo's thrusts, moaning with each one. He shivered at Duo's words, nearly lost it when Duo said he was his, but managed to keep himself in control. He wanted Duo to pin him to the bed and fuck him senseless, until his voice was gone from screaming.
"D-Duo…" He wasn't sure he could even voice his request, everything felt too good. "I want…" He laced his fingers with Duo's as he rested his arms above his head on the pillow. "Pin me...pin me down… S-Show me you own me…."

Gods above he couldn't help himself anymore. "Fuck me until I can't scream anymore."

Duo growled.  Something about those demands made something else inside of him snap.  A need he was pretty sure he’d always had but only now was he able to express it.  He pulled Heero up so that he was kneeling behind him, still inside him, Heero’s chest on the bed while Duo gripped his hips.  Fucking him brutally hard, groaning with each movement.

“You belong to me,” he growled.  “You’re mine forever.  Nobody else can have you.  Nobody else can touch you.  Only me…”

He gave him a more-than-playful slap on the hip

why on the hip? why not on his ass? 

at that last word, grinning almost ferally at him.  “Mine is the only name you’ll ever scream like this.”

Heero cried out at Duo's thrusts, unable to keep up with the pace. He let Duo fuck him, let himself be used as he moaned into the pillow, tears stinging at the corners of his eyes as he bucked back, overtaken completely by lust. He responded only in incoherent babble with the occasional curse word thrown in. He rose up onto his elbows, forehead resting on the pillow, his body rocking with each thrust.
"Y-Yes!" Heero cried. "Fuck me just like that… Yes…" His shoulders were starting to hurt but he didn't give a shit. "Yours is the only name I would ever want to scream… You're the only one whose touch I want and crave and need…"

Duo grabbed a fistful of Heero’s hair, yanking his head back as he fucked him even harder, leaning over him to growl next to his ear.  “Yes, that’s it.  Take it just like this.  I’m going to fuck you until you think you’ll split in half…”  He bit at his throat, enough to bruise, sucking on the wounds until they swelled.

“Does it feel good, baby?  Does it feel good being used and dirty?  Tell me how much you love it…”

Heero lost it when Duo yanked on his hair. His body shuddered and at the last minute Heero managed to stop himself from coming. He cried out, tilted his head more so Duo could mark him more. Tears rolled down his cheeks but they weren't as the result of pain. His vision blurred and he felt something wet hit his hand.
"I love it," Heero said, voice uneven. "I love being your whore, I love being used by you, I want you to make me filthy, so so so filthy… Make me untouchable to anyone else. I want to feel your come drip down my thighs when you're done with me, want your come on my face…"

Duo smirked, pulling on Heero’s ear with his teeth.  “I love making you scream.  I love making you feel so good you can’t hold back.  Go ahead, love…”

He tugged harder on Heero’s hair, stroking his cock with the other hand as he continued to speak into his ear, his voice gentle in sharp contrast to his brutal thrusts.  “Give in…  It’ll feel so good to just give in…  Come for me, baby.  Scream my name and come for me, let me feel you…”

Between the hair tugging and being given permission to come and that voice whispering in his ear, Heero didn't have to be told twice that it was okay for him to let go. He bucked into those thrusts before he screamed, coming hard as he slammed himself against Duo, driving him deeper.
"D-Duo…!" His body tensed as load after sticky load ended up on the sheets, on Duo's hand… He was crying again like he was last night, everything just feeling so good, too good to handle at the moment. His body stilled as his elbows gave out.

"Come in me," Heero murmured. "Come in me and on me. Let me taste you…"

Duo didn’t have to hear the command again.  He’d barely hung on through Heero’s orgasm, barely managed not to lose it inside him then, wanting to feel the way that body clenched and trembled.  He turned him enough to lick the tears off his face as he cried, lasting only a few more thrusts before that same feeling consumed him.

His first load spurted inside of Heero as he groaned, quickly pulling out of him and turning him over and stroking his own cock hard so the next spurt landed on Heero’s face, on his lips, his chest.  Until there was nothing left and he was trembling with the effort of keeping upright, panting and whimpering himself.

He settled down beside him on the bed, just taking in the look of Heero covered in sweat and come and tears.  “...I love you,” he whispered hoarsely.  “I love you so much…”

Heero cried out when Duo filled him, feeling the familiar, sticky warmth. He felt Duo pull out, felt something hot and sticky hit his cheek, his mouth, spray across his chest. Heero licked at the come on his mouth before managing to sit up enough to kiss Duo, let Duo taste himself and taste Heero all at once, his tongue darting between his lips.
"I love you too," Heero whispered, as he stroked Duo's face. "I've...never been sullied like this before." He smirked, dabbing a finger in the come on his cheek before licking it off. "Mmm. There's a tartness...that still tastes sweet."

He rolled onto his side, admiring Duo's body and how that body was his. He took Duo's hand and laced their fingers together.

Duo purred into that kiss, plundering his mouth for that taste, before gently licking the still warm fluid off his face and chest.  Slowly working his way back up the boy’s

I don't even brake when I'm backing up
I'll swerve on a n***a if he acting up 

neck and ending with a long, gentle kiss to his lips.

He grasped Heero’s hand in return, pulling him close on the bed and nuzzling his cheek.  “You haven’t seen anything yet.  This is barely the beginning of ‘sullied.’”  He grinned.  “By the time I’m done with you, there won’t be a patch of skin on your body that I haven’t touched or kissed or come on, and not a single hole or position I haven’t fucked you in until you forgot how to scream.”

He kissed him again, sweet and tender in contrast to what they’d just been doing.  “And you’ll do the same to me.  Because you don’t just belong to me.  I belong to you, too.”

Heero kissed him back, breathing softly as his body relaxed. He hummed in contemplation. "All of my holes, you say?" Heero ground against Duo's thigh. "You'll let me worship your cock with my mouth and tongue and hands?" His cock awakened once more. "Use my hole like the slut in me wants you to?" He purred, biting Duo's lower lip.

"I'm too sore for you to fuck me again, but I can't help this insatiable feeling inside me, something trapped that wants to be set free." He ground himself against Duo's thigh more. "I want you to worship me, worship me as my mother wanted no one to. Touch me." He rolled his hips seductively. "When and if my mother comes to pay you a visit and wish for me to return to the world of light… I want you to be on top of and inside me. I belong to the darkness now. There's no going back for me."

Duo smirked as he felt the boy

I done pushed more sixes than a play date
get money by the millions, fuck a day rate, n***a 

starting to rub himself on his leg like that, giving him his thigh to ride.  He slid his hands along the sides of Heero’s body, kissing the shell of his ear before whispering into it.  Voice pitched to a warm, velvety baritone.

“Yes, baby.  I’ll use you however you need to be used.  Let you suck my cock until I come all over your face.  Fuck you into the mattress while I pin your wrists to the bed and smack your ass until it stings.  Make love to you all nice and sweet and slow when you want it like that.”

He pressed a hand to one of Heero’s bare cheeks, stroking his back with the other.  “Take what you want, love.  Be greedy.  Be selfish.  Use me for your pleasure now…”

Heero gasped, rode Duo's leg harder as he imagined all the beautiful little fantasies Duo spoke of. He licked his lips absently at the mention of his face being covered in Duo's come, wanting it. He kissed Duo hard, sweeping his tongue through his mouth as he pushed Duo onto his back, Duo's thigh right in between his legs as his cock throbbed from the delicious friction.

"I want all of you," Heero murmured, riding him hard. "I'm going to take all of you, make you mine piece by piece… All the while I ride your thigh like the whore I am. Look at me, look at how I've gone from Demeter's innocent little God of Spring to the God of Death's consort and whore." He slipped off Duo's thigh, eyes filled with lust and a sense of mischief before he spread Duo's legs. He rubbed the head of his cock against Duo's entrance.
"Let me take you," he whispered, fingers stroking Duo's cock. "Be mine as I am yours."

Duo shuddered, looking up at Heero as he felt that steel-hard cock against his leg, that delicious weight on him.  He rubbed Heero’s thighs, raking his nails over them.  “Yes…  Let me see my beautiful whore…”

He spread his legs willingly when that slick, pulsing head rubbed against his twitching entrance.  He wanted it in him.  The only time he could ever recall wanting to just open himself and let himself be fucked into oblivion.  “Please,” he whispered.  “Take me.  Make me yours, baby…”

Heero shoved inside him, stealing a kiss from his too willing lover underneath him as he grabbed Duo's hips. One hand caressed Duo's side, his abs, anything he could reach as he deepened the kiss, his tongue giving Duo a prelude to what Heero wanted to do to him below.
"Look at how much you want me," Heero murmured. "Taking me nice and deep…" He nipped Duo's jaw, trailed kisses down his neck before biting the soft flesh there. Blood welled under the surface, bruising the pale skin of Duo's neck quite nicely. He sucked greedily before tilting Duo's head for better access. He nosed at Duo's throat before placing a kiss there.

"Now that I'm inside you… How do you want me to take you?" He was twitching inside of Duo. Christ was he tight. He was going to enjoy this, enjoy how beautiful Duo looked underneath him with his legs spread. "Do you want me to make you scream?" He thrust hard. "Or do you want me to take it slow?" He sensually rolled his hips against Duo's. "The choice is yours…"

I think any time I feel like I can't write smut I should just look at my smut tags for this RP and go "fuck that's hot Jesus Howard Christ."

Duo moaned at that first swift shove, opening his mouth to that kiss and whimpering at that bite to his throat.  He felt so good, so nice and deep inside him.  He could feel him twitching, and his hips arched a little in response.

He gasped at that hard thrust, and the sound melted into a deep moan at the roll of his hips.  “Slow,” he murmured, looking up at him through half-lidded eyes.  “I want to feel every inch of you, baby.  I want you nice and slow and deep…”  He rubbed the center of Heero’s chest before coaxing him down into a long, sensual kiss.  “Make it last…”

Heero chuckled into the kiss as he held Duo's face in his hands, just admiring his husband before kissing him again. He hand stroked Duo's cock in lazy motions, matching the equally lazy, easy pace his hips set. He laid on top of Duo, skin against skin, Duo's cock against his stomach now before grinding against him. "Tell me how I feel inside you," Heero whispered in his ear. "I'm throbbing inside you right now… I'm so ready to come deep inside you, but of course what fun would that be? Maybe I'll fill you until it's gushing down your thighs, just keep coming until you can't take it anymore." He smirked. "My come on your thighs, pooling underneath you…"

The gaze he gave Duo was one mixed with love and desire as he trailed tiny kisses along Duo's shoulder and collarbone, mixing the sweetness of his kisses with the dirty lust in his speech.
"Talk to me. Tell me what you want, what you need."

Duo bit his lip at those kisses, dragging his nails softly over Heero’s back as they moved.  “That’s what I want...I want to feel you inside me, all warm and thick…”  He spread his legs wider, arching his back so he could take him even deeper.  “You feel so fucking good.  You’re so hard and big, so deep inside me…”

He smoothed his fingers through Heero’s hair, crying out softly as he hit a perfect spot.  “Oh fuck, right there.  Right there, baby.  Fuck me right there…”  He was starting to shake, even his fingers trembling.  “That feels so good, don’t fucking stop…”

“I need you,” he whispered.  “I need you to take me like this.  I need you to never let go…”

Heero kept his hips at that angle, hitting that spot that caused Duo to cry out like that. He moaned at Duo's demand, rocking his hips in time with each exhale of breath, nice and slow, not too fast, but certainly hard and deep. "Duo..." He playfully stroked Duo's cock in a completely different rhythm from his hips, varying the length of his strokes and where he decided to touch.
"Surely you don't want it slow forever..." Heero's eyes darkened considerably as he leaned over and whispered, "I want to ruin you."

Duo shuddered as his lover complied, hitting that spot over and over, making him arch and writhe underneath him with each thrust.  He bit his lip at the hand stroking him, that little whisper in his ear.  He wanted to be ruined.  To be taken and fucked so hard he’d scream his lover’s name because he’d forgotten his own.

He looked up into those darkened eyes, his own on fire.  “Harder, baby.  Ruin me.  Break me.  Wreck me.  Turn the tables and make me your whore…”

Heero dug his nails into Duo's hips before slamming his own into Duo's, moaning loudly as he pounded into that spot over and over and over, his body burning.
"I will absolutely desecrate you," Heero promised. "Starting with your ass...and then working my way up. You're going to be dripping come for days after." He crushed his mouth against Duo's, kissing him deep and rough, teeth nipping at his lip and jaw. He bit his shoulder hard enough to bleed, and he didn't care, he wanted to mark Duo, leave him thoroughly fucked, bleeding, and crying.

Duo took that kiss with a soft cry, tangling his fingers in Heero’s hair when he felt his teeth sink into his flesh.  He clutched at him, squeezing him close, needy and shaking.  “Yes…  Yes baby, more…”

His back arched and he wrapped one leg around Heero’s waist, the other spread wide, giving him the most room he could.  His hips rode against Heero’s, hands sliding from his hair and clawing at his back as they moved.  He nosed him for another rough kiss, whimpering into his mouth as his cock was stroked between their bodies.

“Need you,” he gasped.  “Need you to come inside me…  Fill me…”

Heero lapped at the blood that pulsed from the newly created bite wound before kissing it. He winced a little when Duo's nails clawed at his back, but he didn't care. He wanted this...this power he could feel welling up inside of him. Something was awakening, something deep inside him, and soon... Soon it would establish itself fully. He grinned when Duo whimpered into his mouth, and Heero pinned Duo's hips to the bed, nailing him hard and fast, mouth against Duo's neck as he rutted hard into that spot that made Duo scream. He reached between them and stroked Duo's cock, teeth nipped hard against the flesh of his neck.

"I'm gonna fill you," Heero said, voice low. "Fill you and watch it drip out of you like the slut you are. But I won't fill you all the way..." With a grunt and one last thrust he came hard, muscles tensing as he gripped Duo's arm, looking in his eyes as he filled him before pulling out and moving farther up the bed.
"I said I'd desecrate you," Heero murmured, before grabbing Duo's hand and using it to stroke himself. "And desecrate you I will." He came again, all over Duo's face and chest.

"Take it," Heero said. "Take my come. Be my filthy whore." He grabbed Duo and caressed his cheek with the tip of his still spurting cock before shoving it in his mouth and fucking his throat.
"S-Swallow it," Heero commanded, before coming hard again. "That's right.... Swallow all of it."

Duo felt his eyes sting as Heero ground him into the bed, shaking and clutching at him in desperation, soft little screams escaping his lips, then a strangled little squeal when he felt Heero come inside him.  Warm and thick, the sensation sending a hot shiver all through him.  Before he whimpered in dismay when Heero pulled out.

He watched him come with wide eyes, arching his back and baring himself to it.  He moaned at Heero grabbing him, the feel of his cock spurting against his cheek.  He opened his mouth wide when Heero shoved it in, swallowing greedily, sucking him messily when he came again, looking up at him with half-lidded, pleading eyes.

Duo... Duo you know his cock was in your ass right

not supposed to go ass to mouth

oh well it's Rachel's Duo so I supposed it don't matter

hope you enjoy the taste of ass and cum...?

Heero caressed Duo's cheek, looking at him tenderly when he pulled his cock out of Duo's mouth. "You want more?" He kissed Duo, tasting himself and tasting Duo at the same time, before flipping him over, positioning his ass in the air. He pushed Duo's legs apart again, slapped at his ass before slamming into him again.

It was at this moment, probably, where Rachel realised why so many people loved doing not just smut RP with me, but BDSM smut in particular.

"You're mine," Heero said. "My whore. You opened up so easily this time and now you're practically milking me. I'll come inside you again... And then mark you elsewhere." He gripped Duo's hips hard as he pulled Duo towards him, thrusting deep. "I'll use you until you're a sobbing, come covered mess." He slapped Duo's ass again. "And you're gonna like it."

*jumps up from their chair and drops hard to their knees*

sir yes sir 07

Duo let his lover turn him over, eagerly raising his ass in anticipation, whimpering in pleasure at the sting of those slaps.  He screamed again when Heero plunged into him, relaxing and letting his lover fuck him ruthlessly, letting himself stretch around him.  He pressed his cheek to the mattress, starting to sob at the sensation.

He couldn’t speak anymore, but the way his hands clenched in the sheets, thighs spread, hips riding in time with Heero’s thrusts on their own, said plenty about how much he was enjoying this.  He was taking it and loving it, shaking and needy and desperate for more.

Maybe I should write dom!Heero more...

"Scream for me," Heero said, keeping up with the pounding, forceful pace. "I want you screaming and crying and until you are I have no intentions of stopping. Look at you, spread wide for me... You're gripping those sheets so tight, gripping them like you would my shoulders if you were riding me." He smirked. "Would you like that, Duo? Would you like to ride me with wild abandon until you're exhausted and crying and screaming and, the most important part, coming for me?"

this is why Midorin says Heero is a top

isn't it

because holy fuck I understand I understand 

Something was surging through Heero's veins and he couldn't help but laugh a little at how good everything felt.

I think that's the testosterone. 

"You have no idea how good my cock feels inside you..." He thrust harder than he had previously. "How do I feel inside you? Tell me. Scream about how much you love my cock fucking you."

“Y-Yes…” Duo whimpered, barely audible.  It was a feeling he wasn’t used to, the reluctance to admit something.  Normally he just didn’t care what anyone thought of him, but with his lover fucking him, commanding him,

omg seme voice yaaaaaas 

he felt so...meek.  It was frightening but at the same time exciting and addictive.  He needed more.

“I want it…  I-I want to ride you and look down into your eyes and come for you…”  He started to sob again, begging.  “You feel so good in me…  I need it…  I need you…  Please, baby…  Please…”

Heero stopped rather abruptly, pulling out of Duo and slowly watching his come trickle out, down his thigh. He sat on the bed and positioned Duo on top of him, slickened thighs straddling his waist, Duo's arms slung over his shoulders. He kissed him, nosing along his jawline before kissing the bite wound he'd caused earlier. This small tender gesture was in stark contrast to how rough he had been.
"Ride me," Heero commanded. "Ride me and come for me."

scrambles trying to get up from the computer chair to hop on that, trips over legs and feet, faceplants

Duo shivered at the sensation of hot come running down his thigh as Heero pulled out, shaking limbs nearly useless as his lover carefully positioned them.  He sank down once again onto Heero’s cock, arms resting on his shoulders as he started to ride him at that order.

He took it slow at first, biting his lip at the sensation, vision blurry with tears as he looked down into Heero’s eyes.  “You feel so good,” he whispered, hoarse from the crying and screaming earlier.  “It feels so good…”  He gasped at that tender kiss to the wound on his neck, rubbing his body up against Heero to keep stroking his cock between their stomachs.  “Yes…”  He leaned back to look at him again, smoothing Heero’s hair from his face.

Heero kissed away Duo's tears before kissing his mouth again, hands resting on his hips as he gently moved in time with Duo. He figured he was sore, maybe would have even stopped by now, though Heero wouldn't have been happy with that--he was on fire, he wanted to fuck Duo until the world ended, which...would probably end up turning their skin raw. Instead, taking it slow was a much better option, and his nuzzled Duo's neck and chest.

"That's it, baby," Heero whispered. "Just like that. Let your lust and desire take control..." He mouthed against Duo's jaw before nipping it, not hard enough to draw blood, but enough to leave tiny teeth marks.

Heero "Energizer Bunny" Yuy jfc

Duo’s eyes slid closed at Heero taking away his tears like that, tasting them when he kissed his mouth.  He sensually rolled his hips into that motion, kissing him softly, parting for breath when he heard him speak again.  He pressed his damp cheek to Heero’s, shivering at the way they moved together.

“Talk to me,” he whispered.  “Talk to me just like that…”  He needed that soft voice and words in his ear, cradling him close.

Why is it that like every other smut tag Rachel's Duo is like "talk to me" like Heero is giving to an extreme sports dicking here he doesn't have breath for that.

"Beautiful," Heero said. "You're beautiful, especially when you're like this..." He wrapped his arms around Duo, keeping him close as they rocked their bodies together, the friction stroking Duo's cock. "What I would give to stay like this forever..." He nuzzled Duo's cheek, pressed a kiss there before resting his forehead against his shoulder. "Be mine, Duo... Be mine and I will be yours..."

Duo returned that embrace, starting to move

have you found a new word to latch onto now? "Starting"?

Starting to move
starting to cry
starting to sob
starting to stroke
starting to—ENOUGH 

more deeply against him, sinking into the sensation at those words.  “I want this forever…  I want to be yours…  Completely yours…”  He lifted Heero’s chin for a kiss, as deep and slow and sensual as they moved, but at the same time hungry and needy.  Hand sliding through his hair, tongues tangling together.  His other hand explored that body against his, sweat-dampened skin and firm muscles shifting with every move.

His eyes were starting to

oh my god not again 

well again with fresh tears, but he didn’t stop.  Instead he deepened their movements even more, quietly whimpering into that kiss, trembling with how close he was getting, desperate to come soon.

Heero smiled softly as he kissed Duo back, tasting his hunger and need, but also something else. "Then seal it," Heero said. "Come for me...and I'll come for you." He kissed Duo's tear stained cheek before moving a little faster. "Let's make these chains that bind us together unbreakable." He lay down on his back, his hands going from Duo's back to his hands, lacing their fingers together.
"Seal these chains."

Duo lay down with him, holding his hands, tears slipping from his face onto Heero’s.  The change in angle made him moan deeply, starting to

it's like the next "trembling" 

writhe and lose himself in each thrust.  Until finally he began to shake, body spasming gently on top of him as he came with a long, low, whimpering moan into Heero’s mouth.  He was still twitching long after his cock had stopped spurting between them, still kissing Heero deeply, squeezing his hands and crying quietly into the kiss.

Heero held Duo after they were both completely spent, kissing his forehead before stifling a yawn.
"I think after all that we should take a nap," Heero suggested, as he pulled the covers up over both of them. He still felt that surge of power, but he'd figure that out later. Right now he was just too exhausted to think or do much. "You can fall asleep on top of me, I don't mind."

As much as Duo would’ve loved to do just that, he knew it wasn’t a good idea.  Instead, he pulled off of him with a soft hiss of breath at the sensation, laying beside him and cuddling him softly.  Playing with his hair.  “I concur.  I love you, baby.  I love you so much.”

The whole "baby" thing is grossing me out tbh

The next morning, Heero found himself in what he guessed was some kind of garden, though most of what grew there was weeds, or something half dead. He touched a dying narcissus flower and was a little shocked to find that it was looking just bloomed now in the much filtered sunlight. He did this to many of the other flowers, adding more colour to the Underworld than it had seen in a very long time. He knelt down to a patch of dirt and rested his hand over it, concentrating on making something grow when a rather interesting plant sprouted. It was tiny, but it was there, and Heero could feel the thrum of life coming from it. He had never seen this plant before, but perhaps it was an Underworld exclusive. He didn't know and didn't care.

"Mother never let me plant things in her garden," Heero murmured. "I think she was afraid that I would overshadow her with the beautiful plants I can create." He drew a flower in the dirt and grew that same one--was this his power? To create his own plants, not just grow them? He drew an outrageous one that would grow into some sort of tendriled floral tree, the tendril ends reminiscent of his lover's cock.

Heero you fucking freak lmao

"You know what I want? A tentacle plant." 

He moaned at the thought of his plant taking him as Duo did, putting more power than necessary into this patch of dirt.

I want to be taken in this garden, Heero thought. On my knees, from behind. I want to fertilise this barren dirt. He reached under his robe and stroked himself at the thought, spreading his knees. I want him to take me as his dirt covered whore.

It wasn’t long after his morning bath that Duo decided to join his husband in the garden.  To see what he could do.  He vaguely wondered what a god of growth and springtime could shake up in a place like this, and there was really no better time to find out.

But as he entered the garden, his brow arched.  What was Heero doing?

...Oh.  Well.

It was pretty obvious, even under his robe.  The thought that he was so in need that he had to touch himself out here in full view of anyone who happened to walk by gave him a delicious little thrill.  He sauntered up behind Heero, resting his hands on the boy’s

Your bossed up swag got 'em drooling like a newborn babe
the dollars in they eyes got 'em blinded by a masquerade 

hips.

“Good morning, husband.”  He nipped his ear.  “Is somebody being a brazen little whore today?”

*snort* Sorry what kind of fucking phrasing is this??

Heero moaned at his ear being nipped as he leaned back against Duo, grinding his ass against him as a not so subtle hint that he wanted Duo's cock up his ass.
"Only if this brazen little whore is yours and yours only," Heero said, his robe falling open as one part of it fell from his pale shoulder. "Please fuck me. Bend me over and take me." He got on his elbows and knees, hiking up his disheveled robe to reveal his ass. He spread his legs, moaning as he continued to stroke himself.
"Your whore wants to be used," Heero said, practically panting with need. He reached behind him, spreading himself. "Right here." He touched his entrance. "Spread me wide open with that cock of yours."

He didn't care if anyone saw them. By now everyone should have been used to the God of Death mating with his husband. If not, they would have to get used to it--and quick.
"Fuck me. Fuck me hard and fast."

Duo purred as he watched Heero beg, slipping out of his own tunic and kneeling behind him.  He grinned, giving a soft lick to one of Heero’s cheeks.  “Oh I will.  But you’re going to be patient, love.  We have plenty of time and I’m going to make you enjoy every second of it.”

Heero: I don't care if we have the next 12 million years. If I tell you "your whore wants to be used" and to spread me open with your cock, you spread me open with your cock and use me or I'll find someone who will.

He started to gently tease Heero’s entrance with his tongue and mouth, squeezing his hips, stroking over his skin with dull nails.  He reached under him, wrapping his fingers around Heero’s cock and stroking it slowly.

“This is all for me,” he growled between licking him.  “Mine.  All mine.  I own this cock.  I own this ass.  I own all of you.”  He bit playfully at one of Heero’s cheeks.  “You want me to use you?  Make you the filthy, dirty whore you are?  Utterly defile you?”

He brought two fingers up to that entrance, rubbing and teasing one gently inside.  “Just a taste of what’s to come, slut.  Fuck yourself on my fingers.  Beg me for it.”

okay so you already called him a "filthy, dirty whore", you really don't need to then call him a slut.

Heero gasped at Duo teasing him, shivered when Duo staked claim on him. "Yes," he breathed, his fingers clutching at the grass underneath him. "Yours, all yours. Ass, cock, mouth, everything." He moaned at the bite, nearly came at the thought of Duo using him for his own pleasure.
"Please," Heero begged, "use me as you wish. Turn me into your dirty whore, let everyone see how much of a slut I am for you. Fuck me until I'm dripping from every hole. I want you to defile me, I want you to mark me, I want you and to fill me, paint my thighs white with your come...."

He nearly ripped clumps of grass out of the garden he so lovingly brought back to life when Duo slid a finger inside him, his walls clenching around it, trying to take it deeper. He happily rode Duo's finger, completely unashamed at the thought that someone could see them like this. He wanted people to see, wanted people to see Duo take what was rightfully his.

"Please... Please fuck me. I want you inside me."

Duo grinned ferally at him, feeling like he was holding the world in his palm.  He slipped a second finger inside him, crooking it enough to hit his sweet spot, rubbing gently and pressing softly.  “You like my fingers up your tight little ass, don’t you?”  He licked right above Heero’s tailbone, kissing and nipping the skin there.

weird place to lick someone but okay

“I’ll bet you could come just from this.  Just from riding my fingers.  You’re such a dirty, filthy fucking slut.”

okay so this is an example of (imo) going a bit overboard with dirty talk especially the degrading kind.

Filthy slut? Fine.
Dirty slut? Fine.
Fucking slut? Fine.
Dirty, filthy, fucking slut? Overboard. You want to keep it simple. This just sounds kind of insulting imo. 

He kissed up Heero’s spine, over his shoulders.  “That’s it, baby.  Lose yourself in it.”  His mouth wandered up Heero’s neck as he pulled him back off his knees, letting his legs splay across Duo’s thighs and the rest of his body lean back on Duo’s chest while he kept fucking him with his fingers.

That's a hella awks position for Duo's wrist and hand to be in, pinned between the two of them.

He reached down with his other hand, stroking Heero’s cock in time with it.  Nipping his jaw and ear, whispering seductively against it.  “I’m gonna make you come for me, baby.  Over and over and over, until you can't stop.  Until you’re too exhausted to fucking move and so blitzed with pleasure you don’t know what’s up or down.  Nor do you care, you just won’t want me to ever stop…”

Heero gasped at that second finger entering him, stretching him, rubbing that spot inside of him that caused spots to dance before his eyes and molten lava to pool in his stomach. He could only moan in reply as he moved his hips in an attempt to drive those fingers deeper. Duo pulled him back onto his lap and he rode those fingers, hips bucking into Duo's hand in a frenzy of desire and lust.

"More," Heero panted. He tilted his head to the side, exposing his neck. "I need more..." He spread his legs wider, drove those fingers hard inside, his eyes darkened from how much he needed him. "Please... Please turn me into a slut worthy of a god."

PLEASE TURN ME INTO A SLUT WORTHY OF A GOD

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Duo smirked as he kissed and sucked at his neck, driving his fingers in harder against that spot.  Not enough to be painful, but enough to be felt more.  He continued to stroke his cock with the other hand, sucking on his earlobe.  “My fingers aren’t enough, are they, baby?  You want my cock inside you.”

can we stop with the "baby" please it's not sexy in this context

baby is a softer word that does not belong in hardcore fucking kink imo

He teased him a little more before he pushed him back onto all fours again, rubbing the cheeks of his ass gently as he positioned himself.  He slid inside in one slow stroke, leaning over him and pushing down on his back until Heero’s chest met the ground.  He pinned both Heero’s wrists above his head as he started to thrust into him.  Hard and deep, kissing his spine and shoulders.

“Oh yes.  Take my cock just like that.  You’re so fucking tight…”  He grinned.  “You’re gonna sow your seed all over this garden, baby.”

You had me with "You're gonna sow your seed all over this garden" and then lost me with "baby" added at the end.

The thing about "baby" is that it has very sweet, very cutesy, very romantic connotations to it, and it doesn't belong in a place where you have someone pinned down in the dirt fucking them like an undomesticated animal out in the wild. Something like, "I'm gonna have you sowing your seed all over this garden, bitch" would be more with the mood we have here.

Like there are other things outside of "whore", "slut", and "baby" you can use.

"Your fingers aren't enough for me," Heero said. "I need your cock, need you inside me, need you..." Pushed onto all fours again, he couldn't help but notice that some of the wandering souls were trying to sneak a peek inside the garden. He didn't care if anyone saw, but he would have to plant 'privacy flowers' around the perimeter so this could be his private, sacred place with Duo. After he was thoroughly fucked, of course. He could feel the dirt beneath him thrum with some kind of life, felt it surge through his hands when they made contact with the ground. Chest met dirt as he keened loudly, spreading his legs as far as he could to better take all of Duo's cock. His cock twitched at the thought of 'sowing his seed', creating life in a place meant for the dead.

perfect setup for mpreg tbh

"H-Help me," Heero said. "Help me sow every last bit of this garden." He met Duo's thrusts as his knees dug into the soil. He would love nothing more than for Duo to defile him in his mother's garden of all places, but he knew that they couldn't go to the surface. So this would have to be a fantasy playing out only in his mind, replacing the garden he was trying to nurture with his mother's filled with flowers and plants of all shapes, sizes, and types. Water it all with his come.

A+ image right there.

Duo hissed in a breath, fucking him rough and deep, pinning his wrists with one hand while he slapped his ass hard with the other.  Enough to sting and redden.  “Tell me how much you need it, slut.  Tell me how my cock makes you feel.”

oooookay can we cool it with "slut" and "whore" and everything? There are other words you can use (or just don't use anything, "Tell me how much you need it" works fine without the "slut" appended to the end). Use "slut" and "whore" too often, it starts to lack punch.

He started to rub and squeeze his ass as he kept thrusting into him, arching his hips so he could stroke that spot inside of him.  Every so often he punctured the rhythm of his thrusts with a hard, stinging smack to his lover’s ass.  He leaned down to draw his tongue along Heero’s spine, grinning.

“You’re already getting close,” he purred.  “I can feel you tightening on me.”  He chuckled a little, breath teasing over his lover’s skin.  “Imagine her watching us, baby.  Imagine her watching me make a dirt-covered whore out of you, while you scream and sob and beg me for it harder.  Imagine her face watching us while I fuck you until you don’t remember her name anymore…”

Uhhh Rachel

do you not know how fucking weird and awkward it would be to have your parent(s) watch you fuck, let alone imagining them watching you fuck? Like that's gross. No one wants their parents to watch them get down to business. No one would ever want to envision that.

"Imagine someone watching us. Imagine them watching me make a dirt-covered whore out of you" would be one thing. But to ask your lover or whoever "imagine your mom watching us fuck" is a boner killer.

imagining Heero's mom watching him fuck is okay with Rachel but mpreg was completely off the table

Heero gasped at the slap, biting back a moan as he looked back at Duo with lust filled eyes.
"I need your cock so bad, Duo... Being your slut and servicing your needs makes me so happy... You filling me, making me feel so full makes me feel so good inside, makes me want to spread my legs and let you use me for whatever your desires are..." He cried out when Duo touched that spot again, that sweet spot that made him see stars and his cock twitch. Duo's tongue on his spine made him shiver. Each thrust against his prostate had him clenching around Duo's cock, wanting him deep inside, wanting every last inch of cock and every last drop of come inside him.

He pictured his mother standing there, a look of horror on her face as she watched her only son on his dirt covered knees begging for his husband's cock, begging to be taken, moaning loud and long as his legs were parted and Duo's cock shoved inside, filling him.

He didn't have to picture her standing there, however. The woman with a veil for mourning shielding her face pulled it over her head, revealing that it was, indeed, his mother. Heero made sure that when he came, he came loudly, spilling his seed all over the tendril plant he had drawn earlier, watching it soak into the soil as he cried, not caring at all that his mother could see. Heero's grip on the dirt released, and he murmured, "Duo... Duo, she's found me."

I WAS GOING TO QUESTION THIS until it turned out it wasn't his imagination and Demeter was actually there.

Lady Une did not look pleased at all to see her son on his knees taking it from the God of Death of all the deities. This man not only stole her child, but he soiled him, turning him into a whore in service to a death god. She marched right up to the rusted garden gate door and tugged it open, not even wincing as it creaked and groaned.
"What in the name of Olympus do you think you are doing with my child, Duo?" She tried to come closer, but was stopped when a wall of what appeared to be hedges rose up in front of her, leaving only her head visible, blocking access to the two of them. "What is the meaning of this?!"

Heero sat back on his knees now, leaned back against his husband as he smirked and said, "I've been awakened, Mother." He stroked Duo's cheek before kissing him deep and not at all innocent. "Duo has opened my eyes and awakened my powers, the powers you oppressed all those years."
"Opened your eyes?" She scoffed. "More like he did nothing but open your legs."
"He is my husband," Heero said. "I am more than happy to surrender myself to him completely." Heero's eyes narrowed. "Leave. You have no dominion over me anymore, Mother."
"I will not," Une said. "Not without you."

Heero wrapped his arms around Duo's torso. "I cannot leave here--you know that as well as I do. Furthermore, I refuse to leave my husband. I am bound to him and to this place by choice."
Une growled. "Mark my words, boy. I will find a way to break the chains that bind you to this place. And once I do, I will be taking you home." Vines wrapped around her and she struggled against them.
"I told you once to leave," Heero said. "You did not. As consort to the God of Death, I am also ruler here. I will force you out myself." With a gesture of his head, Une went sailing out of the garden, ousted by the vines. Charon noticed her and did nothing but shake his head and tsk at her.

Duo smirked, wrapping his arms around Heero’s waist as he came so that he couldn’t buck right off him in the throes of passion.  All the while he grinned devilishly at Une, stroking Heero’s shaking body after he was spent, kissing his cheek and jaw tenderly.

He watched with utter glee as Heero forced her away with the vines, nosing him for another kiss.  “I think she’s jealous, baby. You know Zeus is the king of minutemen and doesn’t fuck her nearly as good as I fuck you.”

that is such a weird statement to make. 

He was still twitching inside him, still ragingly hard, not having come yet himself.  He rested his chin on Heero’s shoulder, watching the vines.  “Hmm...the ends of them are shaped like my cock.  Was that intentional?”

He smoothed his hands over Heero’s still trembling body.  “I wonder if it would fuck you if you asked it nicely.”

TENTACLES: OK
MPREG: NOT OK

That's such a weird thing. Like you can like what you want or not like what you want but to be okay with tentacle pr0n p much but turn your nose up at mpreg is fucking wild lmao

Heero kissed him again, chuckling a little at the comment about Zeus. "Too bad for her I'm not sharing you. This is one cock I'm having all to myself--and it's still inside me where it belongs." He rolled his hips a little at that, moaning as it hit his sweet spot. "No one could fuck me as good as you do. You're so good to me..." He stroked Duo's hair before the comment about the vines.
"Hmm. That must be by coincidence, but I can't help that... What can I say? I want you so bad... You're inside me still and I want to be fucked again." He purred. The vines came closer; one caressed his cheek.
"You want something else to fuck me?" Heero stroked the vine, licking his lips. "You want this cock shaped plant to fuck my mouth and maybe my ass?"

Heero lapped at the tip, still stroking it as he slowly rode Duo's cock. More vines grabbed at Heero's arms, pulling him off of Duo's cock. Heero groaned at feeling so empty now, but gasped when a vine immediately filled the space.
"G-Gods," Heero said, his eyes half-lidded as it fucked him hard and fast. More tendrils spread his legs as far as they could; another wrapped around Heero's hardening cock and stroked him in time with the fucking one. And just to shut him up, the one Heero was licking and stroking decided it wanted to fuck Heero's mouth after all and shoved itself inside it, filling his mouth and throat. Heero bucked his hips hard, moaning with each thrust as he allowed himself to be violated by a plant of his own creation, all while Duo watched. Another tendril poked at his ass, stroking it before joining the one already inside him. Heero practically screamed as he was stretched more than he ever had been, riding two tendrils now.

You know what

kudos to my younger self

for being this fucking brave

The one in his mouth pulled out and came all over Heero's face. Heero was flipped over and left dangling in front of his husband, come dripping off his face.
"D-Duo..." He could barely form the words as he grabbed for him. "I-It feels so good... I want..." More tendrils rose up from the hedges. "I want you to join me in this pleasure..." He cried out before coming again, and two tendrils grasped Duo's arms.
"Blow me," Heero said. "I want to cover your face in my come as these plants fuck me...and fuck you." A tendril freed one of Heero's arms and he caressed Duo's face. "It's like I'm being fucked by you... I love your cock so much I made a plant in honour of it..." He moaned as two of the tendrils inside him came deep and hard. They pulled out and were promptly replaced by two more.
"My body and soul are yours, Duo," Heero said, lust and desire evident in his voice. "I'm your husband and your devoted whore."

okay you know what?

this is fucking hot.

good job, younger me good fucking job

Duo rubbed his hips as Heero rode him again, coaxing him and kissing his ear.  “Still not sated?  You wanna be fucked again, do you, you hungry little slut?”

rachel

there are other words outside of "slut" and "whore". call him a cumdump, or a cumslut, or a cumwhore, something different YOU ARE RUINING THE SMUT 

He rubbed Heero’s stomach and chest, feeling his muscles flex under the soft skin.  “You even have any come left in you?”

Duo bit his lip as he watched his husband lick and tease that vine shaped so uncannily like his own cock, gasping softly when they pulled Heero off him and filled him themselves.  Duo stroked himself as he watched them, just the look of unbridled ecstasy  on Heero’s face enough to make him moan.

His own eyes slipped half-closed as the vines came on Heero’s face, and the second vine entered Heero’s ass.  He stroked himself slower, wanting it to last longer.  “Fuck that’s beautiful, baby…”

"baby" def does not belong here 

He let the vines wrap around his arms and raise him up, enough for him to just lap softly at the tip of Heero’s cock as that hand touched his face.  Two more wrapped around Duo’s legs, spreading them as another started to tease at his entrance.

“Mmmmh, it wants inside me, baby…”

*frowns* Definitely doesn't belong here. 

He kissed the tip of Heero’s cock.  “It wants me to be your whore tonight…”  He started to rub his lips over Heero’s shaft, moaning sweetly at the taste of him.

"It wants inside you because I want inside you," Heero said. "I control them. And I want to see you being fucked as I come on your face and mark you as mine." Heero rode the two tendrils inside him as his eyes flashed to the tendril teased Duo's entrance.
"Fuck him," Heero murmured, gasping when the tendril entered Duo, licking his lip, hips bucking as if the tendril was an extension of his own body. "I'm gonna fuck your mouth and watch something fill your ass. Worship the god you've created, Duo... I want you to swallow every last drop of my come."

my younger self was such a freak /pos

I'm so proud

Heero rubbed the tip of his cock against Duo's lips before opening his mouth and sliding his cock in, moaning loudly when the tip of his cock stopped short of activating Duo's gag reflex. Heero groaned as he stroked Duo's hair, murmuring about how good it felt to have his cock inside Duo's mouth.
"Show me what you can do with your mouth."

god this smut is fucking good

by "this smut" I mean my smut tags

Duo shuddered, crying out as the vine slid inside him, arching his hips to let it in as deep as it could go.  He opened his mouth eagerly for Heero’s cock, flattening his tongue so he could fit him into his throat, moaning as the tentacle started to slowly fuck him.

He sucked greedily at Heero’s cock, worshipping it with lips and tongue, while his hips rode in time with the vine deep inside him.  He had to come up for air a minute,

bold of you to assume Heero is going to let you get air... 

meeting Heero’s eyes as he felt him stroking his hair.  He licked softly at Heero’s cock, teasing it, murmuring against that hot skin.

“It’s so deep in me.  Feels so fucking good…”  He sucked at that sensitive part right below the head of Heero’s cock.  “I want you to come all over me, baby.  Come all over my lips so I can feel it drip down my chin.  Make me as dirty and filthy as I’ve made you.”

oh my god

stop talking

He licked the base of his cock, sucking one of Heero’s balls into his mouth for a moment.  “Will you do that, baby?  Come all over my mouth while this plant fucks me and I beg you for it?”

rachel

Heero nearly came then and there at Duo's words. He caressed Duo's cheek with his cock, murmuring words of affection before rubbing the tip against Duo's mouth.
"I'll paint your face white with my come," Heero said, stroking himself now. With one simple thought the tendrils withdrew from him and instead went for Duo, all of them facing him.
"Think of these vines as an extension of us," Heero purred. "I'm going to fill you right now... And all of these vines will fill you until you're begging for my cock inside you." He smirked, eyes filled with nothing but lust. "And then I will fuck you until the only name you know is mine." Heero's cock twitched and Heero watched in satisfaction as load after thick, sticky load landed on Duo's face, dripping down his chin before opening Duo's mouth and shoving his cock back inside.

Two of the tendrils came on Duo as well as the one inside him. It pulled out and came all over his ass before retreating back into the hedges.
"We can't leave him empty like that," Heero said. "Keep him nice and full..."
Another vine slid into Duo easily, this one thicker than the others.
"I'm gonna come again," Heero said. "Gonna come right in that throat of yours. I want you to swallow it."
Heero bucked his hips hard and fast before shoving his cock as far as he could down Duo's throat. With a groan he came again, fingers grasping Duo's hair.

Heero pulled out and let himself be lowered to the ground, where he presented himself for his husband.
"Fuck me?" he asked, spreading himself so Duo could see exactly what he owned.

I love how effortlessly Heero can switch from domming the shit out of Duo (with bonus tentacles!) to being submissive

Duo purred as he nuzzled the tip of Heero’s cock, brushing his lips over it in teasing half-kisses.  “That’s it, baby, give me all of it…”  He positioned himself so that his lips were pressed right against that slit, and groaned in ecstasy when he felt Heero come, warm and thick, all over him.  He shivered at the way it ran down his chin, dripped onto his collar.

He looked up at him with dark, hazed eyes as he swallowed Heero’s cock back inside his mouth.  Sucking him roughly, greedily, riding the one tendril inside him in time with it until he felt it pull out of him and come on him.  He shivered, eyes fluttering at the feeling, needing to hold onto Heero’s hips for support.

And it was a good thing, too, because he practically screamed in pleasure when an even thicker tendril slid back inside him.  He growled around Heero’s cock, nearly begging him with his eyes to come inside his mouth as the tendril fucked him.  He swallowed hard, rhythmically, grinning when he felt that hot, thick load slide down his throat.

He rubbed his husbands hips with one hand, stroking himself with the other, teasing the tip against that tiny entrance.  “Yes,” he purred.  “But you’re gonna be patient, baby.  I’m gonna fuck you nice and sweet and slow.  Take my time.  Feel every inch of you…”

oh my god

Heero literally showed you what he wants with sex he wants it hard, he wants it rough, he wants it quick, he wants it frenzied and feral and animalistic

he literally just got fucked by a bunch of vines! that then fucked Duo hard and fast and whatever

and here you are going "I'm gonna fuck you nice and sweet and slow"?

NO WONDER HEERO JUST CUCKED YOU WITH VINES, DUO

He slid inside him in one slow, deep stroke, carefully guiding the rest of Heero’s body back against him with the tendrils’ help.  Holding him from behind in sweet embrace as he started to gently fuck him.  Kissing his neck and ear, holding him close.

Rachel's Duo is literally a one trick pony.

And that is it with this RP. Which means...we have one more to go.

Thank you for watching Duo get cucked lmao

Comments

[sarajayechan]

On the plus side, the smut is becoming less boring and wimpy. Clearly Heero should have taken the reins the moment Duo gave him the seeds, and your smut writing is a zillion times better than Rachel. Like you know how to make things interesting!

And now I see how the "Demeter is going to storm the underworld and take her boy home" plotline was yours, lol, Plurk moves quickly so here I can better absorb it. And yes, you did give Rachel nearly 1000 words of plot hook and storyline and she just. Doesn't care about anything that's not the sex. Fucking rude.

TBH the whole "kidnap victim accepts kidnapping by creep to escape his controlling mother" angle could make for a damn good story. The "traded one gilded cage for another" deal, the fact that unlike back home, HE CAN NEVER LEAVE HELL. Duo being a creepy groomer. The honeymoon period wearing off and Heero REALIZING he's no better off than he was at home. This could make for an excellent dark "romance". But all the "I love you, you are my precious gem" sap Rachel's pushing here is jarring as fuck and we're supposed to believe Duo kidnapped Heero out of pure selfless love for "the boy".

Heero: I don't care if we have the next 12 million years. If I tell you "your whore wants to be used" and to spread me open with your cock, you spread me open with your cock and use me or I'll find someone who will.

Trowa: Like me.
Relena: Or me. /whips out giant strap-on

do you not know how fucking weird and awkward it would be to have your parent(s) watch you fuck, let alone imagining them watching you fuck? Like that's gross. No one wants their parents to watch them get down to business. No one would ever want to envision that.

I wrote a fic for FE Three Houses where two characters boned passionately and one was partially getting off on how much her abusive dad would HATE knowing she was fucking a commoner and loving it, but she never said so during the act and did NOT imagine him seeing them bone. Just imagining how the knowledge would stick in his craw was enough.

And again, I totally get people having squicks and limits, but Rachel didn't even discuss her wilder shit with you. She said no pregging because she hates it and hates kids, but didn't even ASK if you wanted to do tentacles or creepy parent voyeurism.

[omaewokorosu]

Clearly Heero should have taken the reins the moment Duo gave him the seeds, and your smut writing is a zillion times better than Rachel
Heero should've taken the seeds and the seeds should've awakened his Inner Goddess Whore and he should've taken the reins and made Duo his plaything for the rest of eternity and then Duo could've I guess had regrets but now he's stuck with Heero forever and that would've been p great tbh. Like talk about your plan completely backfiring, and doing so in a spectacular fashion!

My smut writing can actually get people off. Hers cannot. No tingling or anything even. Just. "Why is this considered sexy???" over and over. Whereas mine it was like "holy fuck this is hot."

you did give Rachel nearly 1000 words of plot hook and storyline and she just. Doesn't care about anything that's not the sex. Fucking rude.
To be honest with you, I don't know how my younger self was able to put up with her shit for so long. One of my biggest things when it comes to writing is just...bringing everything to life. World building, creating plots in that world, exploring all the different possibilities... Like isn't that a huge part of roleplaying? Even sandbox/dressing room RPs have something going on. I've been accused of spending too much time on world building lmao

So almost 1000 words of plot to play off of and react to, almost 1000 words of story to help build this world a little more... And Rachel was basically like "okay that's nice where's the smut I was promised?" and that, to me, as a writer and RPer and someone who loves creating with words in general, is the biggest fucking insult.

Rachel had no contributions to the plot, to the story, of anything we ever RPed. Not even shit based off her own (equally shitty) fanfiction. I had to carry all of that myself too.

Like Rachel, I'm not going to do all the work for you, you do have to do plotting and things yourself as well! I have an RP I was doing at the same time I was RPing with her (it started a year before Rachel and I met). My partner and I did so much world building for it. Reference materials, spreadsheets, the works.

Our RP is 400k words and counting. Plus the fanfiction we both wrote inspired by it. The English translation of War and Peace averages around 587k words (depending on translation, etc). Collaboration at its finest. And that's a fucking retail AU RP.

That could've been our RPs with Rachel if she gave a fuck.

But no, I'm the one who doesn't give a shit about my "craft". Me. The one who has two reference binders of world building for one fic series and said fic series is 100k+ words.

TBH the whole "kidnap victim accepts kidnapping by creep to escape his controlling mother" angle could make for a damn good story.
The RP makes the most sense if you look at it from two angles: Heero accepting the kidnapping because it means he will get (what he considers) a better life away from his controlling mother", and Duo knowing that Heero is trying to get away from his controlling mother, and using that to his advantage by acting all sweet and loving and romantic until Heero is trapped there, and then just being a fucking creep the rest because that's what he truly is.

And even then, Duo isn't really the appropriate character for that kind of plotline, because idk how I could justify Duo's drastic personality change lol Unless it wasn't Duo being Hades but Duo being like, idk, some Prince of Hell maybe.

The "traded one gilded cage for another" deal, the fact that unlike back home, HE CAN NEVER LEAVE HELL. Duo being a creepy groomer. The honeymoon period wearing off and Heero REALIZING he's no better off than he was at home. This could make for an excellent dark "romance".
If I did this as an original work and not fanfiction (or wrote it as fanfiction and then filed the serial numbers off as a long of people do these days), BookTok would fucking eat it up lmao

Honestly if I were going to continue it, because Rachel's tags suck so bad and half of them are just plain unusable, I would probably take the "dark romantasy" angle and rewrite most of it to where Heero ends up having a moment of clarity and realises, "Oh shit. I've traded one cage for another." And maybe it's after like, I don't know, Heero misses something from the world above, and without thinking tries to leave, only to realise he can't breach the barrier, and that's when it hits him.

And then Heero goes on a quest to figure out how he can undo everything, and Duo tries to thwart him at every turn, uses the Erinyes, etc. against him... It has great story potential in the right hands. Are the right hands my hands? I hope so lol It would definitely be fun to try!

But all the "I love you, you are my precious gem" sap Rachel's pushing here is jarring as fuck and we're supposed to believe Duo kidnapped Heero out of pure selfless love for "the boy".
Yeah because as much as a lot of people try to reframe the Hades and Persephone story as "romantic", it...really isn't. Like yeah they end up actually loving each other but uhhhh the name of the story is the Rape of Persephone. Which doesn't imply sexual assault, rape is also another word for abduction, but it's not really used in that context anymore. I was actually going for a more fucked up angle with this.

But of course Rachel isn't capable I guess of embracing that darkness whereas I wanted to jump in head first. I've made friends with the dark, it's my best friend. Rachel would never understand. IN THE PROCESS OF TRYING TO KEEP THINGS LIGHTHEARTED she just made Duo come off as creepier lmao like Duo looks like he's lovebombing Heero after grooming him into going "you know what my mother is a piece of shit" instead of like. I don't know. Having an actual discussion about how he's an adult now and she can let up, and maybe things would've been better. But Heero acted on impulse as he is wont to do because his is Heero we're talking about. And like Heero so often does, he fucks everything up.

MY PRECIOUS GEM *barf-o-rama* in what fucking world do you refer to a guy as your precious anything???

the other thing that really bothers me is the whole like...infantilisation? of Heero. "The boy" this and "the boy" that like. He is not a boy. He would've been considered a man for like, a couple of years at least now. "The young man" okay, "the man" okay, "the boy" implies he's not even old enough to fuck. Let's not add layers to the creep!

Trowa: Like me.
Relena: Or me. /whips out giant strap-on

porque no los dos I'm down for 3x1xR where Heero is the meat of that sandwich lmao

I wrote a fic for FE Three Houses where two characters boned passionately and one was partially getting off on how much her abusive dad would HATE knowing she was fucking a commoner and loving it, but she never said so during the act and did NOT imagine him seeing them bone.
I think that's the difference. The idea of a parent hearing rumours or word of "oh your son Heero was fucking the God of the Dead" is one thing and works real well at driving home how "taboo" something might be. But the parent catching them in the act or outright imagining the parent is right there watching their son getting his ass plowed??? Gross.

She said no pregging because she hates it and hates kids, but didn't even ASK if you wanted to do tentacles or creepy parent voyeurism.
I TOTALLY GET NOT WANTING PREGNANCY OR MPREG because I know those things (esp the latter) is squicky for people, and I obviously respect people's yucks being my yums. I didn't force her to have preggo characters of any sort. I didn't force her to do anything. If she said she didn't want something in an RP, I said, "Okay" and moved on.

I forget whose idea the tentacle plant was, it could've been mine, it could've been hers. I'm into tentacles, I don't mind them one bit. I think I might've brought it up (the idea of tentacle vine something) and Rachel suggested some kind of plant? I honestly don't remember. But if anything it was def something we both came up with.

Which is why the whole "ew no mpreg wtf is wrong with you why would you like that?" thing is extra hilarious when tentacle fucking usually has the tentacle depositing eggs and them hatching and thus it kind of is like some kind of mpreg lmao

THE CREEPY PARENT VOYEURISM WAS ALL HER THOUGH LIKE WHY WOULD YOU WANT SOMEONE'S MOTHER TO FUCKING WATCH THEIR KID FUCK SOMEONE???

Is Rachel trying to tell us something...?

[sarajayechan]

Rachel/SaltyVinegar knew she was talking about herself when she shit on your fics. Deep down she knew she was a shit RPer and you were amazing and that's why you ditched your RPs with her. She wanted to hurt you and make you feel bad so she projected her own shortcomings onto you.

The RP makes the most sense if you look at it from two angles: Heero accepting the kidnapping because it means he will get (what he considers) a better life away from his controlling mother", and Duo knowing that Heero is trying to get away from his controlling mother, and using that to his advantage by acting all sweet and loving and romantic until Heero is trapped there, and then just being a fucking creep the rest because that's what he truly is.

That's the sort of thing Akio Ohtori would do. Like the way Akio Ohtori treats Touga in Utena, not a one for one comparison but in the "trading in one controlling groomer for another" where Touga escaped his rapey adoptive dad only to wind up in Akio's bed.

And it' 100% not romantic. The same way the reality of the Heero/Duo in this RP isn't romantic. Congratulations, Rachel, you just made me compare Duo Maxwell to Akio fucking Ohtori.

Honestly if I were going to continue it, because Rachel's tags suck so bad and half of them are just plain unusable, I would probably take the "dark romantasy" angle and rewrite most of it to where Heero ends up having a moment of clarity and realises, "Oh shit. I've traded one cage for another." And maybe it's after like, I don't know, Heero misses something from the world above, and without thinking tries to leave, only to realise he can't breach the barrier, and that's when it hits him.

And then Heero goes on a quest to figure out how he can undo everything, and Duo tries to thwart him at every turn, uses the Erinyes, etc. against him... It has great story potential in the right hands. Are the right hands my hands? I hope so lol It would definitely be fun to try!

Hey, if you ever wanna go for it... >3

porque no los dos I'm down for 3x1xR where Heero is the meat of that sandwich lmao

YES. And Quatre just standing there with a thumbs-up like "I taught Trowa well" and cuck!Duo cries himself to death.

But of course Rachel isn't capable I guess of embracing that darkness

And this is the same lady who "rewrote" Avatar books 2 and 3 to be "darker and sexier" by having Katara use blood as bending fluid and then almost drown naked in a river, Zuko kill Ozai, Katara be tortured with acupuncture and almost raped while Zuko was forced to watch, lots of blood and violence, and Azula nearly burn Mai and Ty Lee alive after Mai tells her off.

(Okay, that last part? I actually liked when I dared to peek at her fic, because to me it felt on-brand for what might happen if Mai and Ty Lee turned on Azula sooner and she did more than just toss them in prison.)

Is Rachel trying to tell us something...?

oh my God Rachel

why the fuck

[omaewokorosu]

Deep down she knew she was a shit RPer
Like I don't know if I was the first person she ever RPed with or if she was just plain terrible but like anything else it's literally a skill you have to work at and it requires being able to write. And it would be one thing if it was someone young who needed a bit of guidance and tips on how to do shit better, but Rachel was the age I am now and had been writing for longer than me...and yet I somehow managed to surpass her by a lot.

you were amazing and that's why you ditched your RPs with her.
♥

The biggest reason I remember dropping the RPs was because they were just soul suckingly boring and you can't get inspired by something that gives you absolutely nothing. It's like trying to get blood from a stone. Any blood you may get is from squeezing the damn thing too hard so the blood is actually your own.

She wanted to hurt you and make you feel bad so she projected her own shortcomings onto you.
Oh yeah I have no doubt in my mind about that. Because what this snark series has taught me is that all of the reviews she left on my fics was just her talking about herself, and the proof is in every RP we did together. The characterisation is a disaster, the writing is subpar/mid at best, the smut lacks zest and spice, the constant fucking crying from Duo in particular is incredibly annoying and gets old after three sentences...

Whose characterisations are cardboard cut outs, Rachel? Not mine.

For someone with "shit writing" I sure was featured in four fandom zines! Alongside some of the best writers in GW fandom!

Congratulations, Rachel, you just made me compare Duo Maxwell to Akio fucking Ohtori.
I SQUEAK-LAUGHED BECAUSE IT'S TRUE

Hey, if you ever wanna go for it... >3
Oho? What are you suggesting, Sara?

cuck!Duo cries himself to death.
That might happen regardless he needs some fucking water or something he's dehydrated

"rewrote" Avatar books 2 and 3 to be "darker and sexier" by having Katara use blood as bending fluid and then almost drown naked in a river,
Now I know nothing about ATLA but like...isn't blood bending something like, extremely taboo/frowned upon? And also isn't she a water bender? How tf can someone who controls water drown

Katara be tortured with acupuncture and almost raped while Zuko was forced to watch, lots of blood and violence,
the first part is probs like some shitty hurt/comfort setup where Zuko's healing cock can help her get over all of her twauma or something

like why do people who do "gritty" rewrites automatically go for people getting raped even fucking FE fandom did this shit and said like "oh Lyndis would've gotten raped on the Plains if she were alone" as if she's not an accomplished swordswoman or something like ???

I actually liked when I dared to peek at her fic, because to me it felt on-brand for what might happen if Mai and Ty Lee turned on Azula sooner and she did more than just toss them in prison.
I mean diamonds do grow in the rough. Most of what Rachel writes can't be salvage or if it can it requires really heavy editing and rewriting, but some of the ideas are okay in the hands of a good writer.

oh my God Rachel

why the fuck
I MEAN...SHE DID TRY TO MAKE ME OUT INTO SOME KIND OF LOLCOW? AT ONE POINT when I think if anyone is a lolcow it would be her but she's honestly too boring for KF to even give a shit and there was nothing worth anything about me for them to bother either. Like KF got stared because of Chris Chan.

Who I keep like, comparing her to mentally in my head. Chris never improved on her shitty art and Rachel never improved on her shitty anything. Rachel at least had a couple of jobs but the one turning out to be some money laundering front is...not great. And now the parent voyeurism thing is...well... Chris was trending on Twitter for it ffs after making all of these weird comments about Barb. Who tf thinks of parents watching their kid fucking someone unless...

I wouldn't be surprised by anything at this point.

[sarajayechan]

I have no idea if she RPed before you, but I know she wrote fic and whatever I remember of her fic was either badly-written angst, bad fetish porn, or angry tantrums about how much Aang sucks.

Oho? What are you suggesting, Sara?

I don't read a lot of GW fic these days but I would read this. Like. Throw out Rachel's tags, have Heero realize he fucked up and try to escape this creepy fucker? I think anyone in the mood for something dark and fucked up would dig it too.

Now I know nothing about ATLA but like...isn't blood bending something like, extremely taboo/frowned upon? And also isn't she a water bender? How tf can someone who controls water drown

Oh I didn't mean the bloodbending that happened in canon and traumatized the shit out of Katara when she was forced to use it. I mean she bent the literal blood OUT of a dead soldier's body and used it in place of water. Which...I guess is essentially a step up from what was in canon but instead of making people into puppets she used their vital fluid for a weapon. And it was gross as shit.

She is, yes. But she was also in a trauma freakout and was scrubbing herself raw in penance for what she did before and Zuko had to save her.

It doesn't make much sense, I know. But neither does Rachel.

the first part is probs like some shitty hurt/comfort setup where Zuko's healing cock can help her get over all of her twauma or something

like why do people who do "gritty" rewrites automatically go for people getting raped even fucking FE fandom did this shit and said like "oh Lyndis would've gotten raped on the Plains if she were alone" as if she's not an accomplished swordswoman or something like ???

I don't think it went THERE but it's been so long I could be mistaken.

I STILL REMEMBER HOW ONE PERSON REFUSED TO ACCEPT THE CANON OF THE TALIVER BANDITS KILLING WOMEN INSTEAD OF RAPING THEMAND WROTE A FIC WHERE LYN GOT MOLESTED BY THEM TO PROVE HER POINT. Like the implication was "well it can happen to anyone and this is Medieval Times where women were lesser beings it's sad and antifeminist but it's canon".

I mean diamonds do grow in the rough. Most of what Rachel writes can't be salvage or if it can it requires really heavy editing and rewriting, but some of the ideas are okay in the hands of a good writer.

Yep, very true. I mean someday I might even take that Mai/Ty Lee idea and do something with it.

As for Chris Chan uh...she did worse than weird comments. It uh. Made the news. She got arrested. (Unless you already knew about that shitshow.)

[omaewokorosu]

I don't read a lot of GW fic these days but I would read this. Like. Throw out Rachel's tags, have Heero realize he fucked up and try to escape this creepy fucker? I think anyone in the mood for something dark
That's high praise! I appreciate you wanting to read for something that isn't even really your fandom ♥

Honestly that's pretty much what I'm doing with the three things I'm rewriting. Just throwing out her "contributions", seeing what I have left to work with, and then building upon that. In some cases like Piano Man, it's p much all my original stuff, it's completely rewritten.

she used their vital fluid for a weapon.
okay so

using people's blood to turn them into puppets: creepy, fucked up
Rachel: hold my beer
use their blood as a literal weapon: even more fucked up and more traumatic, also completely unnecessary

what is the point

she was also in a trauma freakout and was scrubbing herself raw in penance for what she did before and Zuko had to save her.
I REMEMBER THIS. I remember this and going "what the fuck and also why the fuck is she doing this?" like I get it, I understand the feeling of being violated and being "unclean" and so forth, but what is scrubbing your hands until you're raw going to accomplish? Why the hands? (If anything, scrubbing her vag or whatever else was violated would make so much more sense.)

Rachel should just not go near trauma anything, she does not have the grace to think about it and pull it off without turning it into literal trauma porn. Trauma isn't sexy. People can absolutely use sex to cope with trauma! It's still not sexy sex! It shouldn't be portrayed that way!

OH YEAH I KNOW ALL ABOUT WHAT CHRIS DID AND ADMITTED TO and then walked the admission back and then like admitted to it without admitting to it by using weird phrasing IT WAS TRENDING, I WATCHED A YOUTUBE DOCUMENTARY.

Chris Chan is a sad case of people taking advantage of a disabled person and manipulating them to the point of warping their reality when they were already compromised anyway, and it all started with Bob and Barb really being unfit as parents plus the time in which Chris grew up and people not really knowing much about Autism... It's just really fucking sad. I don't feel sorry for Chris because she made these decisions herself, but I don't think she is like. Cognitively there enough to realise that Sonichu et al aren't actually real.

(Basically parents need to fucking monitor what their kids are doing online and who they are talking to.)

[sarajayechan]

That's high praise! I appreciate you wanting to read for something that isn't even really your fandom ♥

♥

using people's blood to turn them into puppets: creepy, fucked up
Rachel: hold my beer
use their blood as a literal weapon: even more fucked up and more traumatic, also completely unnecessary

what is the point

So she could title the chapter "The Red Storm", have an angsty Dying Declaration of Love from Jet to Katara, have Katara go apeshit, and be Edgy. Yet this is the same lady who wants sappy romance between the God of the Underworld and the guy he kidnapped instead of making it fucked up.

Luckily Katara is never actually raped in Rachel's longfic but you'd think she'd do that since she had a whole One Piece fic about how Nami was raped by Arlong and that's why she tried to blow Zoro while she was drunk.

Chris Chan is a sad case of people taking advantage of a disabled person and manipulating them to the point of warping their reality when they were already compromised anyway, and it all started with Bob and Barb really being unfit as parents plus the time in which Chris grew up and people not really knowing much about Autism... It's just really fucking sad. I don't feel sorry for Chris because she made these decisions herself, but I don't think she is like. Cognitively there enough to realise that Sonichu et al aren't actually real.

Yeah. I feel sorry for Barb with what Chris did to her, but she and Bob didn't help Chris's whole situation. Like it wasn't just being a Cringy Fan, Chris engaged in the online fights and made bad choices.

(That said, devoting an entire public hatedom to one person for being "cringe" is cringe in and of itself. Chris did dumb things, but people could've just. Ignored her unless she was breaking rules and even then just handle it quietly.)

[omaewokorosu]

ngl "The Red Storm" sounds like a euphemism for having your period.

The red storm approaches... Blood will be spilt, people will be hurt, there will be so much anger, and conflict, and tears...

(That's a very metal way of describing it anyway lmao)

Yet this is the same lady who wants sappy romance between the God of the Underworld and the guy he kidnapped instead of making it fucked up.
The problem with Rachel is, I think she's really only doing these omgsoedgy!11 things just for shock value. To be "look at how ADULT I am! I definitely don't make stories for BABIES!" which is cringe but also funny when someone is 16 years old themself...it's cringe in a really bad way when you're in your 20s and 30s.

Like it would be one thing if Heero had other reasons for wanting to go to the underworld. But I can't think of any like, good reasons for it tbh because I feel like Heero being like "I want to escape to Hell" is basically "I want to die but not die, I want to disappear but not be dead." And that's how I'm going to treat the fic version of it.

Chris did dumb things, but people could've just. Ignored her unless she was breaking rules and even then just handle it quietly.
Yeah but you know how those kinds of people are. They're bullies and unfortunately the prime target of bullies are people with disabilities.

[sarajayechan]

ngl "The Red Storm" sounds like a euphemism for having your period.

It was for me before I had my diseased uterus and ovaries removed, lol.

The problem with Rachel is, I think she's really only doing these omgsoedgy!11 things just for shock value. To be "look at how ADULT I am! I definitely don't make stories for BABIES!" which is cringe but also funny when someone is 16 years old themself...it's cringe in a really bad way when you're in your 20s and 30s.

Honestly that sounds pretty accurate. Like she hated the hopeful and idealistic themes in Avatar and compared it unfavorably to shows like Batman and X-Men and Gargoyles, she wrote darkfic with blood as bending fluid and drunk rape victims giving blowjobs, but it was all for show. Like if she knew it might make people uncomfortable she was all "well this is how adults write" but when you actually WANTED hardcore fucked up shit, she went "oh no but Heero needs softness or he'll cry!!!".

Yeah but you know how those kinds of people are. They're bullies and unfortunately the prime target of bullies are people with disabilities.

Yep. D: Fuck those people.